Everything at Once-Chapter 4-Solitaire- Brian's POV

[plumsuede]

It isn’t like I haven’t been alone in my bed before.  Or been alone in my bed or my head right after I’ve fucked him.  Or waited for him to get back.  Or get home.

I light a cigarette. Stay on my back.  Stare at the ceiling. Try to keep my mind on something other than what just happened.

“Yes.  That’s all you can say.  Just ‘yes.’”  He was

Comments

[theiax]

That was a really wonderful chapter, fabulous game of Justin's, very hot, very sexy. The imagination you used to come up with this game of Justin's wove a wonderful spell around what would have been a normal sex scene, somehow making it so much more intimate and meaningful. And the concept of starting Brian off in bed alone and ending alone, with just this beautiful memory in the middle was very sad but brilliant.

I am anticipating many more wonderfully written chapters all about the machinations and remembrances of Brian's mind!

Beautiful job, thank you.

thank you so much

[plumsuede]

It truly makes me so happy that you read it, liked it, and commented on it. It also makes me feel good that you understood what I was trying to get across. I was very worn out after writing this chapter. xoxo

[u2_grrrl]

Just wanted to let you know that this is so hot, it's all I thought about today at work, and in Astronomy class...

“Did I just hear you moan like a slut?”

Yes. Yes, you did. Shit, that's hot!

please note the icon too

[plumsuede]

Thank you for reading, for commenting, and for making my day. Seriously. I had the WORST day today. And I sat down to LJ and saw your comment and I needed that today. Please keep reading. Chapter 5 is in the works.

Re: please note the icon too

[u2_grrrl]

OMG: You live in NC *AND* you love QAF? I thought I was the ONLY one!

I'm going to read this again now. I think it's like the 4th time. Seriously.

Re: please note the icon too

[plumsuede]

*friends* you, it looks like we have more than just our addiction to b/j fic/QAF in common..... I think maybe kitty cats? if I read your lj right. Looks like we'll be buds.... Thanks for the feedback.

[plumsuede]

I fear that nothing I write these days is "work safe." In fact, on the "work safe continium," I think I am sliding way off the deep end.... But that you for the comment/compliment....

[plumsuede]

Yay! I'm so glad you're reading!!!!

My, my, my, my, my!

[strutter1976]

Is it just me, or is it getting hot in here? I'm tempted to go buy some cigarettes. This chapter is dark, sexy, haunting, happy, sad. That's a sexy game the two played and I liked the power play between Brian and Justin--inside and outside of the bedroom. *Heading to get next fix*