Comments | bjfactory: fanfic100 Theme 91: Birthday [Naruto manga - Uzumaki Naruto, Haruno Sakura, Team Kakashi]

bjfactory

fanfic100 Theme 91: Birthday [Naruto manga - Uzumaki Naruto, Haruno Sakura, Team Kakashi]

May 29, 2007 18:26

Fandom: Naruto
Title: A Gift at the Falls
Author: bjfactory
Theme(s): fanfic100 #91 - Birthday
Characters: Uzumaki Naruto, Haruno Sakura, Sai, Yamato, Kakashi
Rating: PG
Warnings: Possible spoilers for those who do not follow the current manga. Well, probably not much.
Disclaimer: Kishimoto's characters and my words.
Summary: Naruto at a place where he'd rather ( Read more... )

sakura, fanfic, naruto, narusaku, team kakashi, fanfic100, manga

Comments 8

aubreywitch June 14 2007, 17:47:24 UTC

Cute. ^_^ I especially liked the concept of Sakura wanting to figure him out medically so she could better heal his injuries.

bjfactory June 14 2007, 18:10:14 UTC

^_^v

CHIYA! Glad you like it! This is most likely just the start of a longer piece. With a lot more NaruSaku moments to come ^_^v

michiru42 June 16 2007, 06:05:27 UTC

Of course, this makes me wonder just what's in the letter.

I like how your Naruto needed his space. Some writers have him needing Sakura 24/7 and that's just...unhealthy. Naruto on his own daydreaming and having things he wasn't comfortable talking about were nice touches.

bjfactory June 16 2007, 18:48:40 UTC

Yes! The first person interested in that letter! ;D ( ... )

thequietwriter June 17 2007, 05:40:27 UTC

I guess I'm the second person interested in the letter. I'm very curious of what is in it. If you ever continue this story, you're going to have to let me know somehow.

thequietwriter June 17 2007, 18:06:30 UTC

Thanks!

...

Diabolic laughter

We shall see when the next part comes out....

XD

bjfactory June 17 2007, 18:07:39 UTC

GARG!!!

I hate have to re-login when my computer shuts down on me!!!

(Above comment is mine.. ^_^'')

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