Pluto begins, an old August short, revised

[bjfactory]

I kind of stumbled upon this and realized how much better it could have been and that I really liked the possibility in this story that I didn't really work towards the first time I wrote it. I hope you enjoy the revision!

Title: Child of Pluto, Child of Chronos
Author: bjfactory
Theme: sm_monthly Day 1: Origins
Genre: General/Drama
Version: Manga
Rating: PG

Comments

[sea_thoughts]

Wow, thanks for re-writing this, it's so moving. And I really like your idea of the Senshi encountering benign powerful beings. Cosmos points towards that.

[bjfactory]

Thanks! I THOROUGHLY enjoyed rewriting it. I'm glad I found it and re-read it! I like how Stars really opened the universe up to not just more Senshi from distant and unknown planets, and the expansion of other intelligent beings in the universe much like Earth, but just how much richer the world would one day be when writers explore what else could come from the distant stars...

-sigh-

It's kind of romantic...

(If the aliens are like... not attacking and killing people at random.)

[sea_thoughts]

I agree, things become much more interesting when you think that all the other galaxies have senshi and they were all aware of the ginzuishou. :)