Heartless: Loveless Fic

[bitterfic]

Author: Bitterfig

Title: Heartless

Fandom: Loveless

Pairing: Ritsu/Soubi

Beta-Reader: Nzomniac

Word Count: 1086

Rating: R

Warnings: Violence.  References to physical and sexual abuse.  Spoilers up to chapter #55 of the manga.

Author’s Note: Written for

Comments

[transcending]

Very good. Ritsu is a character you don't see written often, and this is a very complex take on him. Also, it was interesting the way you added in Ritsu's alleged relationship with Soubi's mother. Great work, and thank you for participating.

[bitterfic]

Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I love twisted relationships so naturally I'm really interested in Ritsu and the role he played in shaping Soubi, making him both unbeatable as a fighter and more or less unreachable as a human being. The relationship between Ritsu and Soubi's mother hinted at in the recent Zerosum chapters added a whole 'nother level of tangled to the pairing so of course I couldn't resist writing about it.

[haavruuva]

Well, I don't like Ritsu in general, but I like to hate him. This was very realistic and nicely ansty.

OwO

[monedameow]

This is incredible, really incredible; I have no other word to define it.

Re: OwO

[bitterfic]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm pleased to know you liked it.

Amazing story

[anonymous]

That was beautiful. It showed Soubi and how he came to be who he was.

It also showed Ritsu well.

Everything was great. I love how you compared ritsuka and soubi and their situations.

Amazing fic.

Heartless

Re: Amazing story

[bitterfic]

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it.

manga chapters.

[veja24]

I loved this so much; I wish it was in manga.
Can you please tell me in which manga chapter did Ritsu raped Soubi? I've tried to find it, but without success.

Re: manga chapters.

[bitterfic]

Ritsu raping Soubi is never explicitly shown or stated in the manga. What we do see is Nagisa noticing that Soubi's ears and gone and confronting Ritsu about this.