Strawberry Gashes: Harry Potter Drabble

Dec 31, 2008 16:05

Author: Bitterfig
Title: Strawberry Gashes
Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing: Bellatrix Lestrange/Alice Longbottom
Beta Reader: Fedink
Word Count: 195
Rating: R
Warnings: With this pairing, violence is unavoidable. Also sexual content and possible implications of non-con.
Author’s Note: This was written for femslash100s Drabbletag v.3.0. The prompt “Harry ( Read more... )

femslash/yuri, drabble: harry potter, fandom: harry potter

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diachrony January 1 2009, 01:43:09 UTC
Scrumptious and sinister...yummy.

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bitterfic January 2 2009, 14:20:37 UTC
Thanks so much.

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twisted_knicker January 1 2009, 16:00:27 UTC
Delicious.

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bitterfic January 2 2009, 14:20:19 UTC
Thank you.

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twisted_knicker January 3 2009, 11:17:12 UTC
So I was talking to Lash saying how I usually like a more in depth, detailed, longer fic But that yours was a perfect capture of the smallest moment in Bella's life that the reader really doesn't need more than this. Very well done indeed. :D

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bitterfic January 9 2009, 14:16:08 UTC
Again, thank you. I was really happy with how this piece turned out. I tend to prefer longer, more detailed pieces myself but when I was writing this I was thinking of it almost as a poem or the lyrics to a song and I think it works well on that level.

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lash_larue January 1 2009, 18:09:48 UTC
How wonderful to see something from you! And such a marvelous little thing it is.

One day Alice Longbottom I will have you till I want no more. I will bite into the fruit of you. I will raise strawberry gashes on you. I will glut myself on you till nothing remains.

Purest Bella. Kudos.
L

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bitterfic January 2 2009, 14:19:53 UTC
Thanks so much.

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redbeargrl January 1 2009, 22:57:25 UTC
So deliciously evil!
Such wonderful imagery is so rarely seen anymore.
Love it!

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bitterfic January 2 2009, 14:08:42 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it.

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sheepfairy January 10 2009, 03:39:51 UTC
Ah, this is freaking amazing. I love how lush it is, and full of detail. And how the descriptions have sort of a bitter, twisted edged to them, perfect for Bella.

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bitterfic January 14 2009, 14:00:52 UTC
Thank you so much.

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