Comments | bittereternity: i take the blue ones every time (pg)

bittereternity

i take the blue ones every time (pg)

Nov 25, 2009 01:14

So, this just kinda poured out. Let's see how that works out:

Title: i take the blue ones every time.
Author: bittereternity
Words: 1,856
Rating: PG
Character: Chase-centric, Chase/Cameron
Notes: contains spoilers up to 6x09 Ignorance is Bliss.
Summary: Chase delves into the aftermath of killing Dibala.

It begins on a Tuesday ( Read more... )

character: greg house, character: allison cameron, fandom: everybody lies, character: robert chase

Comments 11

mae_vaughan November 25 2009, 01:35:41 UTC

This is just incredible. Your style is so simple yet so fulfilling and somehow complex at the same time. Every word just perfectly fits. A beautiful, inspiring, nostalgic and altogether tragic read. Thank you for sharing it with us - I'm so glad you decided to post to the CC community, and truly hope we'll see more from you again soon.

bittereternity November 25 2009, 12:57:30 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm really pleased by your comment! This is the first time I've written Chase and I was very nervous because he's such a complex character and I wasn't sure if I was getting him right.

Your comment is truly inspiring, thank you!

templeremus November 25 2009, 09:39:51 UTC

This is great. You've encapsualted Chase's arc with spare, succinct prose that still manages to pack a hefty emotional punch.
Beautiful, moving, perfect.

bittereternity November 25 2009, 13:00:15 UTC

Thank you very much for your comment. I'm so glad that this worked for you. Your comment means a lot to me! =D

waylandsmithy November 26 2009, 16:39:54 UTC

I thought this was really excellent, from the beginning where you show Chase's doubts about Cameron's commitment to the relationship, right through to the last bleak line. Great, spare style too.

bittereternity November 26 2009, 22:06:36 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it. =)

chocolate_frapp November 26 2009, 17:02:57 UTC

this is just terrific! I love the style, almost Hemingwayesque.

bittereternity November 26 2009, 22:09:06 UTC

Wow. This is extremely flattering. Thank you very much, sweetie! =) Hemingway is one of my favorite authors and I absolutely adore him, so that means a lot.
Plus, this was my first time writing Chase or anything Chase-related so that's why it means a lot more! :D

chocolate_frapp November 27 2009, 18:28:55 UTC

you're very welcome. :)

danakm November 27 2009, 04:13:07 UTC

this is gorgeous :)

would it be ok for me to archive it at itstuesday.org?

bittereternity November 27 2009, 05:22:01 UTC

Thank you very much!
Yes, sure, go ahead! I'm glad you find this worthy of the archive... thank you! =)