I read it was by you, and was like, score, she writes for another pairing I like. Then I read like a paragraph and i was like, where is the mindfuck, scrolled back up to check yes, she really did write this, and then puzzled, continued reading. I do think your style came through it though, even if there was more humour than usual.
humor that pesky beastoctavius_xJanuary 2 2011, 03:22:35 UTC
This story got really dark half-way through around the interrogation scene and then I just scrapped half and rewrote it. I so pleased/ashamed that you associate me with mindfuck stories.
If you're interested I wrote an much more serious ShiIta story A Single Man for one of the other B_n exchanges. There's also a couple drabbles here, in the Naruto section. :>
This complimented Splash wonderfully, original and witty in it's own way with it's own style. I salute you for having the guts to write a sequel to a fic by Ronsard, I wouldn't haha, darn these literary geniuses.
Right? Haha! This was a bad, bad idea. I can't believe she let me. We're not the same type of writers at all so I just did my best to emulate and add to the story rather than imitate.
Yeah Taj, you horrible writer, committing basic logical fallacies like putting "ronsard" and "intelligentsia" in the same sentence. You should be busted back to English 101 for that >{
In reality, I made a noise only heard in hogs being stuck when I saw this on my flist yesterday morning, and the entirety of my new year celebration was plagued with the niggling desire to just lock myself in a room with a computer and read read read. Adaptation distillation doesn't get any better than this, where all the basic elements are taken and condensed into a much more substantial work that isn't even half the length of the original (awful) story. I think it's you who should disown my fic because how can you tell people that something like this is a sequel to a story about go-go dancing? That's just disgraceful
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SWEET RELIEFoctavius_xJanuary 2 2011, 20:47:26 UTC
...write a continuation with a more serious tone even though it'll probably turn out dreadful if not total shit. Madara needs to make a return, after all. YESSSSSS. We should keep in the tradition of horrible onomatopoeia titles alive
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Re: SWEET RELIEFronsardJanuary 2 2011, 21:39:47 UTC
I WAS JUST GOING TO SAY. For my part I also wanted to suggest dirty onomatopoeiae but the options for that would probably be limited unless you want to really scrape the barrel. Sizzle? Whip? Fap?!
Of course I wasn't hinting at Sasori. While you were thinking up legitimately interesting details for the story, I was busy trying to choreograph Itachi's routine; one example to show where my priorities lie. Again, like I said, I can't really do dark so I'm hesitant to write a continuation even though I really want to. I've read this story like seven times now (forgot to comment on the part where I LOVE your Naruto like AMAGAD ♥♥♥) and you've really reset the tone for this universe in my mind. "More serious" =/= actual seriousness. You've read my "dramatic" writing, there's really only so much depth I'm capable of.
Shisui/Kabuto/Itachi ahahahaha--oh god I would not recommend writing that, it's hazardous to one's health, but at the same time I totally advocate the writing of that, jfyi. Kabuto is my favorite little shit, I believe I've
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I am caught between YOU ARE AMAZING and THIS IS AMAZING and AHAHAHAHAHA.
Stupid boys, they are so amazing and stupid. *_*
Also, as I worship the ground Ronsard writes upon, I completely understand wanting to create a ~homage. I have never been brave enough to attempt one, however, so bravo!
I'm kinda two months late in commenting, but screw it.
:DDD That was AWESOME! Loved it!
:3 A good sequel-type thing to Splash!
Also, this line is win:“What about-about Orochi. He didn’t ask you anything? Or make you do anything inappropriate?” “Why do you think he was missing a hand?”
Oh my dear, I'm so sorry I didn't see this comment! I feel awful, but thanks so much for stopping by and reading this even with all the typos. Really <3
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If you're interested I wrote an much more serious ShiIta story A Single Man for one of the other B_n exchanges. There's also a couple drabbles here, in the Naruto section. :>
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Loved it though, very much :}
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Thank you though :D
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In reality, I made a noise only heard in hogs being stuck when I saw this on my flist yesterday morning, and the entirety of my new year celebration was plagued with the niggling desire to just lock myself in a room with a computer and read read read. Adaptation distillation doesn't get any better than this, where all the basic elements are taken and condensed into a much more substantial work that isn't even half the length of the original (awful) story. I think it's you who should disown my fic because how can you tell people that something like this is a sequel to a story about go-go dancing? That's just disgraceful ( ... )
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Of course I wasn't hinting at Sasori. While you were thinking up legitimately interesting details for the story, I was busy trying to choreograph Itachi's routine; one example to show where my priorities lie. Again, like I said, I can't really do dark so I'm hesitant to write a continuation even though I really want to. I've read this story like seven times now (forgot to comment on the part where I LOVE your Naruto like AMAGAD ♥♥♥) and you've really reset the tone for this universe in my mind. "More serious" =/= actual seriousness. You've read my "dramatic" writing, there's really only so much depth I'm capable of.
Shisui/Kabuto/Itachi ahahahaha--oh god I would not recommend writing that, it's hazardous to one's health, but at the same time I totally advocate the writing of that, jfyi. Kabuto is my favorite little shit, I believe I've ( ... )
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Itachi, don't you want your "girl" hawt? :(
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Stupid boys, they are so amazing and stupid. *_*
Also, as I worship the ground Ronsard writes upon, I completely understand wanting to create a ~homage. I have never been brave enough to attempt one, however, so bravo!
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:DDD That was AWESOME! Loved it!
:3 A good sequel-type thing to Splash!
Also, this line is win:“What about-about Orochi. He didn’t ask you anything? Or make you do anything inappropriate?” “Why do you think he was missing a hand?”
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