Comments | bitter_cakes: lets leave everything behind and run

bitter_cakes

lets leave everything behind and run

Nov 12, 2010 22:51

let's leave everything behind and run
→ minho x key; pg-13; 1143 words

( “Kibum” Minho watches his lips move as he says his name, he gives a short smile and decides to accompany the boy back home. “The alleys aren’t a good shortcut back home” Minho says, looking over his shoulder. Kibum looks up at him, purses his lips and only gives a short smile. Minho takes one of the bags in his hands, “I’ll help”. Kibum gives another smile, Minho takes it that he doesn’t speak much. )

pairing: minho/kibum, rating: pg-13, fandom: shinee, !fanfic

Comments 31

ayame_ikatsu November 12 2010, 18:11:03 UTC

Ohh, this was really good!
I loved how Minho gave Kibum just that more confidence he needed to climb over the fence, that was flawless ♥

Also, I had a question, how do you change the margins of the text and how did you make a fake cut? I'm planning to post some fanfics of my own, but my livejournal skills suck. ;~;

bitter_cakes November 13 2010, 02:43:38 UTC

yesss. kibum's supposed to be weak and useless, and minho's supposed to be there helping him all the way.
oh click HTML on your post, and paste [p style="text-align: justify; margin: 0in 2in 4pt"]text here[/p] change the "[]" to "<>". replace the 'text here' with your story/post/entry. as for the lj cut, find for this

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ayame_ikatsu November 13 2010, 12:51:26 UTC

ohh, that helped a lot already, but with fake cut I meant like the link on shinee_replay? lol how do you do a link with your own text?
... I feel so fail. (_ _")

ayame_ikatsu November 13 2010, 13:36:41 UTC

Ahh never mind I already found it!!

Thanks so much for helping me out ♥♥

wykedpanda November 13 2010, 00:16:02 UTC

I....<3 this...it's so beautiful. I love MinKey to bits, and you just fed me something I needed, because I've been lacking MinKey these days.... <3

And Key could NEVER be weak and useless, and I hope they run away, far away, together...forever :D *teeheehee*

Thank you for sharing~~~ This was beautiful, no lies. :)

bitter_cakes November 13 2010, 02:44:35 UTC

awww. thank you for calling this beautiful. ♥
minkey has been really attractive lately idek what to do about them anymore, so i just had to right a fic. yes, they're gonna run faaaar faaaar away together. xD

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bitter_cakes November 13 2010, 02:44:55 UTC

thanks ♥ let's all hope they managed to run away. :D

mickyart November 13 2010, 04:05:49 UTC

thank you thank you, it's beautiful ...
I imagined this story happened at the era of Berlin wall, so romantic
Wrote more minkey please ... they are such a gorgeous couple

bitter_cakes November 13 2010, 07:31:27 UTC

thank youuu. ♥

aka_theen November 13 2010, 04:42:34 UTC

wae so sad???
but i hope they manage to runaway.. :')
although my heart breaks a little but it's a beautiful story, thanks 4 sharing <3

bitter_cakes November 13 2010, 07:31:55 UTC

well the genre is angst, so it's sad yet happy at the same time. :)
thanks for reading.