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bitter_cakes October 20 2010, 14:10:10 UTC
spot for my 2min captain colorphase

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colorphase October 20 2010, 14:21:07 UTC
YOU. YES YOU. I REALLY DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY OMG I LOVE THIS WHY ARE YOU SO AMAZING IDE

It is a surprise when Suzy finds Taemin on the school rooftop, back against the tattered walls, cigarette dangling between the fingers and a tired expression showing in the depth of his eyes. “What are you doing?” she asks, the tremor in her voice as clear as crystal. Taemin puffs out a cloud of smoke, after inhaling the disgusting taste of the cigarette, “Don’t ask something you already know”.
so sexy oh god

Taemin looks at her indifferently, “Kiss me and I’ll stop”. Suzy stares at him for almost a minute before she grabs him by the collar and plants her lips on his cold ones. The kiss is somewhat smoky, urgent and emotionless, but she just wanted to somehow.
/runs around the house screaming taezy

She meets Taemin (finally, she thinks) but he walks right pass her with a slight bow. Minyoung holds her shoulders and whispers, “Be strong”. Her knees threaten to unbuckle, her tears threaten to fall but she stays strong. She refuses to cry in a ( ... )

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bitter_cakes October 20 2010, 14:55:10 UTC
aww ♥ THANK YOU FOR THE LONG ASS COMMENT, RIRIS.
yes smoking!taemin is sexy even though i dont really want it to happen irl. DONT RUN AROUND THE HOUSE SCREAMING TAEZY OR YOUR FAMILY WILL BLAME ME.
OMG YES IT'S FLUFFY BUT ANGSTY IT'S GREAT THAT YOU NOTICED <333

lmao, caps abuse.

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bitter_cakes October 20 2010, 14:10:47 UTC
spot for my dinotwin/taezy captain who's away for the week deasyellow

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deasyellow October 22 2010, 03:11:29 UTC
jfkhdghdjfkldahfkjdhjgkhdlfj
I. CAN'T. EVEN. BRAIN. INCOHERENT.
okay brb trying to mend words and TIDY UP MY BRAIN BECAUSE THIS IS TOO AWESOME FOR WORD OMG MICHELLE IF YOU CAN SEE ME YOU'LL BE AMAZED AT THE DAZED EXPRESSION YOUR FIC CAN PULL OUT OF ME.

okay no seriously brb writing a more coherent comment.

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deseived October 20 2010, 15:12:56 UTC
This is really nice.
I should start reading more heterosexual fan fiction. (I have only read like, five?)
Thank you for writing this.
(... My comment is a bit too short. /hides)

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bitter_cakes October 21 2010, 02:47:39 UTC
noo. it's okay and lovely. heterosexual fanfics are actually good if you find a pairing that you really like. :)
no worries, i loved the comment and thanks for reading <3

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thunggyu October 20 2010, 16:13:03 UTC
okay.
i... fucking love this.
and i'm going to ship them now, yeah.
omg, it's so awesome seriously.
and you can write this well in school? ahajfjhfjththd >.< /jealous TT

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bitter_cakes October 21 2010, 02:50:07 UTC
brb, giggling at the cuteness of your icon.

LOOOL IT'S BECAUSE I'M NOT LISTENING TO WHATEVER CRAP THE LECTURER'S SPOUTING. no one in the hall actually is, because if you just glance (don't even talk about looking properly) everyone in the hall is actually using their phones (phones are actually not allowed in our school). so i had to write. <3
and thanks for reading.

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bopeep_achu October 20 2010, 17:10:42 UTC
OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!
the moment suzy confessed I SHIP THIS PAIRINF LIKE
SO.FUCKING.MUCH!!

AND THIS IS A PERFECTIONN!!!

memming this... so i can reread it forever XD
i' think i'm gunna save this in my ipod too .__________.

FINALLY TAEMIN LOOKS MANLY *___________________*
cos suzy is too femminine <333

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bitter_cakes October 21 2010, 02:52:49 UTC
OMG YOU TOO? :DD
i was spazzing with my friends on how cute suzy was when she tried muttering taemin's name. <3
OMG YES. I HAD TO MAKE TAEMIN MANLY BECAUSE HE WAS ALWAYS THE ONE CRYING IN THE OTHER FICS. HAHAHAHA.

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