Comments | bits_and_pieces: Bleach: "Shades of Surrender"

libekory in bits_and_pieces

Bleach: "Shades of Surrender"

Jun 08, 2008 14:16

Featuring: Aizen/Shirosaki/Gin
Rating: R
Words: 1445

Contextual spoilers only. (As in, if you haven't read the very latest chapters, you won't know why anything might be spoiling you.) Also written all in one sitting, for gogochan. I didn't make her birthday contest, but I hope she likes it anyway.

( Maybe you shouldn't have joined up with old man Yamamoto's war efforts before seeing Shinji again, and figuring out how to REALLY suppress me. )

sousuke aizen, !bleach, .slash, ichigo kurosaki, gin ichimaru, -ooh threesomes, hollow!ichigo kurosaki

Comments 5

_profiterole_ June 9 2008, 16:51:03 UTC

OMG, that's so HOT! *fans self*

yawns_widely June 9 2008, 17:07:14 UTC

*GIGGLES* This is a delightful piece. I really like how you characterise his hollow with a bravado that masks his ... not innocence exactly ... inexperience...?

The best line for me had to be:

'"And I don't need one, either. Fucking human bullshit, if you ask me. You people really can't tell each other apart without them?"'

You did a good job of writing Shirosaki's arousal and I love the ending. It would not surprise me if Aizen wanted Shirosaki as an ally. Good job.

I liked it a lot ramenlass June 9 2008, 18:37:39 UTC

Ah Shiro, you just can't help yourself can you? snickers, but that's why you're my favorite hollow. =)

madrona_8 June 9 2008, 23:58:49 UTC

Yeah, I see Aizen wanting Shiro as his ally as well. I think you've got them down very well. Aside from that, it was hot. I will definitely be waiting for more

xtainted_blackx June 10 2008, 18:37:33 UTC

rawr. Gin x hallow!Ichigo action. That was pretty hawt.