Comments | bisteu: row 17; myungsoo/suzy one-shot

bisteu

row 17; myungsoo/suzy one-shot

Jan 07, 2014 13:18

angst/broken!myung
1.7k (also, this was partially written backwards and makes sense in my head, but I'm sorry if it seems confusing)

I haven't written fic in forever and I've started again, so this is the first one-shot I finished. Hopefully more to come!

( Their story is more like a chapter than a novel, but it’s theirs. )

pairing: myungsoo/suzy, group: miss a, rating: pg, group: infinite, length: oneshot

Comments 6

devilgirlmaria January 8 2014, 00:14:39 UTC

OMFG this is AMAZING I'm not usually one for these kinds of fics since i'm too much into descriptive, visual, imagery, poetic writing but WOW this was just so well written in that really simple way but still meaningful and deep and the details of there meeting is so cute and literally you have there relationship spot on the way I love it being written it's obscure and the mentions of there love for words and prettiness ;)

fave lines

"But she loved freely and he admires that because it’s more than he could ever do"

"You should try it sometime. Parts of it sucks, but the rest of it is beautiful.”
And he believes her."

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bisteu January 8 2014, 06:40:23 UTC

thank you for reading! and i get what you mean, i'm a sucker for pretty/prose descriptions and it's something i'm trying to slowly incorporate more and more into my writing. by personality, i'm a very concise person & straightforward so that translates into writing for me haha.

devilgirlmaria January 8 2014, 07:04:01 UTC

don't worry it's GORGEOUS the way it is hehe I'm defo a sucker for all of that maybe a bit too much haha especially for myungzy when I write I probably take the descriptions and prettiness to far LOL but I like it so hehe, and straightforward is good and ugh I just don't know what else to say because I LOVE IT SO MUCH <3

uljima January 8 2014, 14:49:40 UTC

“It’ll be just like Splash Mountain, won’t it?” He ignores the crack in her voice and the moisture in her eyes and focuses on her lips instead.
“I think it will.” His voice is as steady as he can keep it.
“Good,” she smiles that beautiful smile and it’s genuine, unlike the forced ones of the flight attendants minutes earlier. “It’s my favorite ride.”

this was my favorite bit! and it might be because i was once in a semi-airplane accident and yep, it does feel like splash mountain, haha.
this is a lovely, interesting piece! ♥

bisteu January 8 2014, 19:00:53 UTC

;~~; fangirls a little bit because i love your fics so much and you've read this one & don't hate it

i originally wasn't planning to write a bit like that, but it happened and i really liked it too! glad you enjoyed it ♡

kurdoodle January 9 2014, 08:51:08 UTC

falling

She grips his hand, "I didn't think it was possible in less than eight hours-"

falling

"and even if this wasn't happening, I'd feel the same way." She grins at him; the light is still highlighting her hair perfectly and if he squints it looks like a halo.

falling

"I love y-"

this part killed me. it's so beautiful. wow.