Fic: I Thought This Only Happened in the Movies (Rachel/Quinn, Finn/Puck, PG-13)

May 13, 2010 01:20

Title: I Thought This Only Happened in the Movies
Author: biruuu
Pairings: One-sided Rachel/Quinn, one-sided Finn/Puck
Words: 6358
Spoilers: Takes place roughly around 1x08 "Mash-Up".
Summary: The night before her birthday, Rachel makes a wish that could potentially turn her life upside down.
Notes: Written for the gleefics Birthday Contest. Huge thanks to unequivocally and ipleadthe5thRead more... )

fic:glee, pairing:rachel/quinn, pairing:puck/finn, rating:pg13

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mywholecry May 13 2010, 00:54:50 UTC
I really enjoyed reading this! I think bodyswap is really easy to mess up, but this was just the right amount of both silly things and actual thought behind who the characters are to work out really, really well.

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mywholecry May 13 2010, 01:04:15 UTC
also, my insanely large usage of the word 'really' shows much I really liked this :)

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biruuu May 13 2010, 20:28:54 UTC
Thank you! Not gonna lie, when this idea first came to my mind, I thought it was all going to be fun and games, but then when I started writing, it got really confusing at some points D: I'm glad you liked it.

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unequivocally May 13 2010, 00:57:19 UTC
Aw, yay, it's up!

Congrats on completing it!

Remember what I told you about closing your legs? PLEASE DO IT.

This still remains my favorite line, I love, love, love Rachel/Finn friendship, especially when they're being so silly and goofy as such. Fantastic job, dear and I'm so sorry I was such a crap beta! Haha<333

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biruuu May 13 2010, 20:32:53 UTC
Rachel/Finn as friends is the only way I like them, although I'm sure I'll end up shipping them at some point, like I ship almost everything else in this show (I'm so weak, omg).

No way, you were an awesome beta. I still can't believe how lucky I got :D Once again, thank you so much ♥

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jacketweather May 13 2010, 01:10:31 UTC
I was suprised by how sweet that was. Very Freaky Friday. The couples were really cute together. I'd be interested in reading more of this.

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biruuu May 13 2010, 20:37:28 UTC
Thank you! I was so tempted to name this fic Freaky Finn-day. I wish I was kidding...

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jacketweather May 14 2010, 06:39:13 UTC
Hoo boy. That is nerdy. Thankfully you've won me over enough with your fic that I won't have to shun you forever for that awful pun, haha.

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andbless_mybaby May 13 2010, 02:03:47 UTC
Oooh, this was completely fabulous. I think that this is the most awesome and convincing instance of bodyswap I've ever read. It was funny and hot and a little bittersweet, too - basically everything wonderful in a tidy and well-written package. LOVE.

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biruuu May 13 2010, 20:48:47 UTC
Wow, thanks!

I was a little worried about the pronouns and the how-to-refer-to-body-parts issue (like, should I say "Finn's eyes" when they're really Rachel's? and stuff like that). I didn't know whether it was going to be too confusing or not, so I'm really glad that it worked for you.

It was funny and hot and a little bittersweet, too

Funny and bittersweet was what I tried to aim for, so again, I'm happy that you saw it that way too.

Seriously, this is such a nice comment, I want to frame it and show it to my mom or something, lol

Thank you so much :'D

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shizam_i_am May 13 2010, 07:12:39 UTC
wow i really liked this! your writing is great and you have their voices (especially rachel) down perfect! some of my favorite parts were:

The second time Rachel got caught trying to get into the ladies’ room by mistake, they sent her to an emergency meeting with Ms. Pillsbury, who handed her a brochure with the words “To Penis Or Not To Penis: A Guide For Sexually Confused Teenagers” written on the front. She happened to find it extremely informative.

perfect. i love when emma's crazy brochures are included.

“Today is a very special day, and I have something to say to all of you, my felonious glee clubbers...”

i seriously busted up laughing here

When he started to feel the urge to run his hands through Puck’s mohawk, he decided that it wasn’t like he wanted to touch the guy’s dick, so no gay there. He lifted one hand from where it was resting on Puck’s hip and touched it.

fjkldshagjkhyauigjdklsafiosaj *ded* ngl, big fuck shipper here.

so great job, thank you for sharing! :D

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biruuu May 13 2010, 20:53:33 UTC
Emma's brochures are hilarious, I wish we got to see more of them.

Thank you for taking the time to comment, I'm really glad that you liked it :)

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