Comments | biruuu: fic: falling is like this (puck/tina, pg-13)

biruuu

fic: falling is like this (puck/tina, pg-13)

May 04, 2011 00:58

Title: Falling Is Like This
Pairing: Puck/Tina
Rating: PG-13 for language
Word Count: ~4000
Summary: He doesn't understand why he keeps falling for his friends' girlfriends.
Spoilers: Up to 2x06
A/N: Written for masaysimacatch for the glee_rare_pairs exchange. Title taken from this song.

( Puck's halfway done putting his pool cleaning stuff away for the day when his left buttcheek starts vibrating. )

fic:glee, puck/tina, rating:pg-13

Comments 19

thefantasmickah May 4 2011, 06:59:41 UTC

Tinaaaaaaaaaa. So much Tina love going on right now and it's awesome.

Okay three of my favourite characters from Glee were in this and you wrote them so well. Puck, yessss, the badassery which sometimes is sweetness but he'll never admit it, and Mike being such a good bro with Puck. And Tinaaaa being all awesome and shit.

(Well this certainly isn't my most well thought-out review ever, but...)

Seriously, Tina is my fandom bicycle. And I really enjoyed this. It's a nice take to see her with Puck (I'm not sure I could see her with any of the other guys [besides Mike, obviously] actually).

Very nice, thanks for sharing.

biruuu May 5 2011, 22:08:59 UTC

Haha it's true, Tina is getting so much love lately. And I actually wanted to write more Mike, but I didn't trust myself to get him right considering how little of him we've seen. I'm so glad you liked him anyway :) Thanks so much for your comment!

emptyharmony May 4 2011, 20:34:03 UTC

Aw! This is really fun. I love Tina and the tabasco and how awesome she is. Of course Puck would fall in love with her.

I also really enjoyed Rachel's cameo - post break-up counsel for the good of the Glee Club is so very her. That touch was hilarious and so in character.

YAY! I love this story. :D

biruuu May 5 2011, 22:21:29 UTC

It's good to hear that about Rachel's cameo :) I wasn't even planning on her showing up at first but then I wrote a little throwaway line and I ended up having to write the whole scene. Anyway, thank you for commenting! I'm glad you thought it was fun <3

reverie_405 May 5 2011, 00:21:23 UTC

So Pina is my UC OTP and I can't tell you enough how much I love your characterizations of them. Puck was hilarious and I love that he was pissed she never gets solos. And I love your Tina--her getting him back with Tabasco, her beating him at video games and convincing him to let her put guyliner on him--all their little moments were just perfect to me :) Loved it!

Oh and can I just add I love that he's bros with Mike? K. That is all.

biruuu May 5 2011, 22:30:56 UTC

Thank you so much! I'd never written any fics focused on Puck (or Tina, now that I think about it) before, so the fact that someone who ships them as much as you do liked their characterization means a lot to me :)

alionforalamb May 5 2011, 01:34:19 UTC

I read this because you titled it after one of my favorite ani difranco songs, and though I normally only read female/female pairings, I really enjoyed this.

biruuu May 5 2011, 22:33:40 UTC

Haha, well I'm glad you did even if it's not what you usually read. Thanks!

ellydash May 5 2011, 18:59:43 UTC

Oh, my gosh, this is so, so sweet. I love what you do with Puck here - he's a perfect blend of S1 and S2 Puck (which, considering when this story is set, makes total sense). I've never really thought about shipping him with Tina before, but you've convinced me that they'd be great together. <3

biruuu May 5 2011, 22:49:46 UTC

I'm so glad to hear that, because that's what I was trying to do with him - Puck's character has changed so much between S1 and S2 and I wanted to write him as a sort of mix between the two. Not gonna lie, I'm such a fan of yours that I'm thrilled that you liked it. Thank you so much for commenting :)

ps: added you back ♥