Comments | bironic: Fic: "Untouchable," House/Wilson, R

bironic

Fic: "Untouchable," House/Wilson, R

Jan 28, 2007 09:54

Title: Untouchable
Pairing: House/Wilson
Rating: R
Word Count: 3,200
Summary: After Atlantic City, Wilson seeks comfort at House's apartment and asks a question of his own.
Spoilers: Takes place immediately following "Son of Coma Guy," with spoilers for Season 3 up to that episode.
A/N: Thank you to my wonderful, wonderful f-list, especially topaz_eyes and usomitai ( Read more... )

my writing, house: misc

Comments 115

almostjulie January 28 2007, 16:18:15 UTC

Gah! This hurt so much, and it was beautifully written. Loved it.

bironic January 29 2007, 02:33:15 UTC

Such an unhealthy relationship we fans have with some stories -- sadistic writers and masochistic readers! Thanks for the comment.

hopegeeksout January 28 2007, 16:47:42 UTC

I LOVE THIS.
I LOVE IT.
Decree: This officially happened in-between Son of Coma Guy and Whac-A-Mole. No, don't protest, it did. It happened.
:)

bironic January 29 2007, 02:36:17 UTC

*g* Who am I to argue with a decree?

I started writing this the week after the episode aired, and I was sure "Whac-a-mole" would throw the whole thing off somehow -- but it turned out to fit in really well, and what started as a post-ep fic turned into a bridge of sorts, helping explain why Wilson got so angry so quickly. So I'm glad that worked for you.

hopegeeksout January 29 2007, 03:42:02 UTC

Yeah, it worked very well! I love "canon-bridge"-type stories. It's very well written and I want more!!! Please! Because David Shore and Co. so generously *cough*annoyingly*cough* leave so much up to our imaginations.

livelove423 January 28 2007, 16:48:29 UTC

My heart hurts. This was so... perfect. You made it so easy to feel every emotion, from both Wilson and House. I hoped in my head for a happy ending, but knew it wasn't going to happen, but you made that perfectly okay. Wonderful.

bironic January 29 2007, 02:37:26 UTC

Thanks very much. I'm glad the emotions came through clearly; they were tricky to get down. And I'm sorry your heart hurts, but at the same time... I'm not at all. :)

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bironic January 29 2007, 02:41:27 UTC

Hey, thanks. Coherent reviews have their merits, but it's also wonderful to get a comment like this that really shows the emotional impact one's story has. 'Course, I wouldn't protest if you do come back to elaborate.

petrichor_fizz January 28 2007, 16:52:03 UTC

From the very beginning this story completely held my attention, but I was especially impressed by Wilson's fleeing from the apartment. The whole thing seemed completely psychologically authentic to me.

bironic January 29 2007, 02:50:11 UTC

Thanks -- I'm particularly glad to hear that you were drawn in and kept in, even with so many descriptive paragraphs without dialogue.