Sestina!fic, Remus

[bironic]

This was the first sestina of all of them that I started, and it's still not finished. It was supposed to be a breathless sort of poem about the night Sirius nearly got Snape killed, bracketed by the somber reflections of current-day Lupin, but it kept getting stuck the further I went, all tangled up in itself, trying to say too much in too little

Comments

[elynittria]

I like what's here. This format is amazingly difficult; I admire you for tackling the challenge. Have I mentioned lately that I love all your sestina!fics?

[rubynye]

Poor Remus. :(

I like the structure, though.

[bironic]

Oh, thanks! I'm glad you liked what there is of this.

I did manage to finish half a dozen other sestinas a couple of years back ( tagged here), but I'm not sure that you and I share those fandoms (House & Stargate: Atlantis).