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ladyivy May 8 2008, 21:15:12 UTC
Lexx is evil. Lex should know this; they are the same person after all.

This was a great chapter. I am curious to see where you end it - where Lex is and what he is doing when at the end of the story. There are so many possible ending points and places to go with this.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

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bipolypesca May 9 2008, 11:17:43 UTC
Thanks very much. I hope you like where it goes. :)

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rednihilist May 8 2008, 21:25:59 UTC
This chapter unexpectedly moved me. Kal and Lexx so easily forgiving him, and then being able to see his own future, but knowing it to be so far away was tough to read. I'm just hoping that the end of this story maybe skips ahead to when Lex and Clark aren't enemies anymore? *bats eyelashes* These days, I need, if not an exactly happy ending, at least a hopeful one. We all know where the show is heading and I like to have my boys together. . . even if it can only be in fanfic.

Not that I won't absolutely worship anything you do with this story. I'm a romantic, I guess. *shuffles feet* But. . . where was I? Oh, yeah! Great chapter and I always really look forward to updates. Can't wait for more! *g*

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bipolypesca May 9 2008, 11:18:17 UTC
Aww, I'm so glad you were moved! Thanks very much, and I hope you enjoy the ending.

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touchstoneaf May 8 2008, 22:46:33 UTC
>>Lex," he met his gaze, "you try too hard. ...When you want something, you try it absolutely to death." He paused briefly. "Dad taught us to go after the things we wanted. ...But I don't think he ever considered that maybe the things we want... might be a little more delicate than the things he wanted ( ... )

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bipolypesca May 9 2008, 11:20:52 UTC
that's so fucking brilliant...

Whyyyyyyyy, thank you! ^_^ I'm really glad you're still enjoying the story.

thanks for adding the restroom. makes me feel better

LOL! What's funny is that I'd already written that scene when you commented that you were wondering about Lex's bladder needs. I thought, "heh. Well, this chapter here should relieve some of that concern..." Looks like we're both a little obsessed with the details. ;)

this story... one of my main reasons for scanning my flist lately!

Wow, that is a really nice thing to say! Thank you so much for your comments. :)

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twinsarein May 9 2008, 02:28:39 UTC
Great addition. I love that I have no idea how this is going to end. You could go so many different ways with this. Looking forward to the next couple of chapters.

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bipolypesca May 9 2008, 11:21:06 UTC
Thank you. I hope you enjoy the rest. :)

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capnzebbie May 9 2008, 02:40:13 UTC
This chapter was lovely--charming and touching. :) Lex's interactions with the AI crack me up. :D

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bipolypesca May 9 2008, 11:21:39 UTC
LOL! I'm so glad you like the A.I.! She's kind of a pet character of mine. ;) Thanks!

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