Comments | bionic: FIC: "if hope..." [supernatural, sam/dean, pg-13]

bionic

FIC: "if hope..." [supernatural, sam/dean, pg-13]

Jul 24, 2008 22:40

If hope...
by bionic
pg-13
3,653 words

summary: If hope is a dangerous hole, will you join me? Angst, in a motel room. Takes place sometime during season 3 though I'm not sure where because of my avoidance of actual timelines and sometimes canon. I like to play in my own box...?

( Dean’s foot on the gas never lets up until the full moon has disappeared into a brightening sky and his eyes are drooping shut. Things had started going south after the werewolf slashed open Sam’s side and Dean had a bitch of a time trying to stitch him back together again. )

fic: sam/dean, supernatural

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bionic July 25 2008, 22:27:05 UTC

oh guh, I love those long epic fics that you're talking about, the buildup is really worth the wait I think ;)

But yes, this one was just a short little thing. Dean has inappropriate urges ALL the time :D Thanks so much for reading!

innie_darling July 25 2008, 14:10:30 UTC

Oh, gorgeous. This particularly: “You’ll know when the time comes,” Dean says after a while. His voice sounds very small and low, even to his ears. Sam’s gaze has fixed on his face again, and his eyes are dark and full of shadows. Dean wishes he could chase them away for him, or bring the sunlight spilling into the room. Sometimes he wishes he could wipe himself from Sam’s memory, so Sam could be free of this and never have to remember Dean caught and struggling in this losing battle for his life.

bionic July 25 2008, 22:28:53 UTC

Thank you! It's so ridiculously awesome to have people quote stuff they liked back. Really glad you liked it :)

bigmamag July 25 2008, 17:14:39 UTC

Oh my, the part where Sam has planned out what he wants to say to Dean as he dies, how he'll hold him...rip my heart out and spit in the cavity, why don't you?? D:

bionic July 25 2008, 22:31:21 UTC

awwwwww... I'm sorry =( But it's true!! I know those sorts of thoughts would enter my mind, if I knew it was inevitable... those last moments are crucial for them both =(

..ok, that really made me want to watch the finale again. But gah, don't know if I can...

bigmamag July 26 2008, 03:19:45 UTC

Only way I could watch that again is with a group of fangirls holding each other because I'd need a fucking support group for that shit!

charmedstrange1 July 26 2008, 04:42:45 UTC

Girl, word.

charmedstrange1 July 26 2008, 04:41:20 UTC

Okay, I have to weigh in since no one has mentioned this bit yet--

my very favorite (read= most painful) moment was this -

“I’ll be there.” Sam’s breath is warm against Dean’s neck. “I won’t let go.”

Ohh, waaaaaahhhh!! The contemplation of that moment, and Sam being brave enough to admit to it, and then that awful, solemn promise. So achy and beautiful here, and thank you for doing this for us-- the case studies can wait. :)

bionic July 27 2008, 02:58:08 UTC

aww..thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it, and yeah, wayyyy more fun than writing case studies. Needless to say my case study sucked after spending all my time writing this...lol.

kokoda2007 July 26 2008, 10:12:54 UTC

*gulp*

I feel emotionally drained. This was absolutely beautiful.

Thank you so much for sharing.

bionic July 27 2008, 03:00:07 UTC

Thank you for reading :) Glad you liked it!