Fic: Torchwood: Guilty (Jack/Ianto)

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TITLE: Guilty
RATING: Adult but not that explicit.
WARNINGS: Slash, but you knew that already.
PAIRINGS: Jack/Ianto, Ianto/Lisa
SUMMARY: We've both been accused of believing too long… Ianto and Jack don't quite make it work. But they're trying.
WORDS: 1023

Comments

[verasteine]

And at the end he's wet and drained and used and he's not sure which way's north any more. And Jack's become his compass, and this is his confession.
Great insight into Ianto in season one. And beautiful language, too. And then this:

Jack is pulling out of him and he's remembering Lisa's blood and the way her body stared up at the ceiling. And he's remembering how it felt to be finally totally free.

Holy! What an ending. Really hits home, and is so realistic and true. I love the way you write these two.

[rexluscus]

Wow, this was ferociously good. The ending killed me.

[wynkat1313]

wow... good work. The least paragraph in particular just pulls it all together (ok duh, its supposed to, but still you did it well) and kicks us in the gut. really well done.

[be_a_rebel]

Oh God. This just broke my heart. Beautiful.

[laurel_lye]

Hi, Just had to stop in, found this story at torchwood house, and love it!

,Take me Torchwood for I have sinned.
That's just so unexpectedly lovely, it made me gasp!
Thank you!