Because it's the 4th...

[bingblot]

Happy birthday, goldy_dollar!!!! You're one of the best writers around- in any fandom- and I'm so glad I've gotten to know you, Frances!! *glomps* I hope you have an awesome day!!

And now, just for you, as requested, Firefly fanfic

Comments

[goldy_dollar]

Sarah! You're amazing! Thank you so much! I'm so excited about this piece.

Okay - first, I squeed. Any M/I fic is capable of making me squee, but also? You picked such a good scene!!!

That was what made him, made this, so dangerous-because the feelings she had for him, her reaction to him, weren’t only physical. If they were, she could deal with them.

Mmmm. Love that look at Inara. I think it's very true too. Mal is so very consuming for her because he operates on this level she's never had from anyone else. And it's very frightening to someone like Inara, who's perfected the physical and knows nothing about the emotional.

With Mal, what he didn’t say was always more important than what he did say.

Heh! So. Very. True. *laughs*

Poor Mal. He would do so much better if he kept his mouth shut. *g*

*hugs*

This was the first thing I got to read when I got up this morning. Definitely a fantastic way to start the day. *memories*

[heart_of_wine]

This is wonderful! I adore the way your wrote them. Inara, particularly, is perfect. They have such an unspoken chemistry between them, and you did such a great job at capturing it.

Hugs,
Elia

[browncoat_2x2]

Oh, very lovely! I love this moment, and I've always considered it the one in which Inara gets an incling that Mal does have feelings for her.. great choice! And wonderfully expanded on!

But with Mal, it was more than that. That was what made him, made this, so dangerous-because the feelings she had for him, her reaction to him, weren’t only physical. If they were, she could deal with them. She knew physical, understood physical-knew how to deal with it.

Oh, so perfectly true! I love this!

[browncoat_2x2]

You know... as I think harder on this, I have to revise my statement above... I think this is the moment Inara gets an incling of How Much Mal feels for her, but more importantly, I think this is the moment when Inara realizes that *she* has feelings for him!!! Just had to add that... ;o)

[lovemycaptain]

Happy Birthday Goldy... and it certainly is a great way to celebrate your b-day with a wonderful fanfic.

With Mal, what he didn’t say was always more important than what he did say.

So true. But that's what makes him so interesting. *grin*

[nerca_beyul]

Love it...