aldebaran + cosmonaut (drabbles)

Aug 20, 2012 15:39

a pair of drabbles inspired by the stars.
they have totally different feels, i think, so if you're only in the mood for one then you might not want to read the other

title: aldebaran
length: drabble (763 words)
genre: fluff
pairing: baektao
rating: g
summary: in which baekhyun and tao look at the alpha star of the constellation Taurus
note:and yup i'm too ( Read more... )

drabble, fanfic, aldebaran, cosmonaut

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theblobmaster August 20 2012, 21:09:12 UTC
the baektao. it's so extremely beautiful. really beautiful, and i just want to gaze at stars after reading it. it's sweet.

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binarysun August 21 2012, 00:51:45 UTC
thank you! i'm glad you feel that way; i've never been able to go stargazing, myself (sigh) so I tried to channel what it must feel like. sorry, that was kinda going off on a tangent but anyways thank you for reading and the compliment! ;;

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theblobmaster August 21 2012, 13:17:42 UTC
If you ever get the chance, do it.

I live in the capital of my country, but even so I'm able to see a lot of stars at night. Also I have a lot of friends that live out in the country side, so there are always stars to look upon.

It's an amazing feeling, try it at the first chance

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eoryndal August 20 2012, 22:27:09 UTC
Stargazing and BaekTao <3 Two of my favourite things in the galaxy. Especially because your writing is so beautiful and soft.

And the second one, you write fantasy so beautifully! With a hint of horror, just enough for a nice shudder.

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binarysun August 21 2012, 00:52:51 UTC
thank you so much wuh ;; have you been stargazing before? i wish i knew more about it ahahaha

and thank you! did it really make you shudder? i didn't think of it as horror when i wrote it but i'm starting to have second thoughts ksld;jhdhd

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eoryndal October 1 2012, 02:45:39 UTC
One month late reply. I'm sorry ;__;

I have been stargazing before, if lying in the grass in my parents' backyard on summer nights counts. <3 I know some stars and constellations. I've been to planetariums, too. When I was a kid, my dream was to become an astronaut and I remember secretly staying up one night just to watch a lunar eclipse. I wanted to study astrophysics. But I have too many things I love and now I study languages and stars always make me so, so wistful.

It's not the bloody kind of horror but it did make me shudder for real. I guess it's in the way you describe the star as a corpse and the way Lu Han laughs and his empty joy mixing with the pain. It's really intense.

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envybleedsgreen August 20 2012, 23:10:43 UTC
I've missed you! It's nice to see that you're back.

The HunHan... Wow, I shuddered and felt so saddened by the ending, though I understand what he meant [through your little note]. It was nearly horrifying, but you wrote it so beautifully.

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binarysun August 21 2012, 00:54:49 UTC
thank you! ;; I'm really touched that I was even missed in the first place, i got kinda emotional from it aha
thank you so much! I honestly didn't have ideas of horror when I was writing it, but I'm...glad (?) that it impacted you like that. Anyways, thanks for continuing to read my stuff and leaving such wonderful comments D: I'm so touched sob sob

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envybleedsgreen August 21 2012, 01:49:39 UTC
Aw, you don't need to be touched from me. ^^ And you're welcome, dearie. <3

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califei August 20 2012, 23:34:42 UTC
these are so pretty ;; the contrast between them is pretty nice, how baek and tao are already stars to each other, and how luhan desperately wants to be one.
"He points up to the night sky with a tapered finger"
crey because baek's fingers orz

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binarysun August 21 2012, 00:57:36 UTC
thank you! and oh, you noticed! i thought it was a little weird having one super romantic story and then a sad kinda scary one but i suppose it kinda works?
oh yes, baekhyun's fingers ;; baekhyun's everything, really.

(b-by the way this is kind of off topic and creepy but after you added me I went to your journal because I like to check people's journals out and i read your baekyeol fic and I really like it, it made me laugh a lot! yeah really creepy but I think you should totally share it c: )

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califei August 21 2012, 19:13:22 UTC
thanks for checking out my fic ;; heheh it's not creepy at all. i'm kinda new to posting stuff on livejournal orz

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akaanee August 21 2012, 02:21:17 UTC
i approve of you writing baektao fluff. this fandom needs more of the beef couple 8|b

but oh my gosh it's so sweet and the whole analogy with people as starts was so beautiful and i love it very much??? ;_;

and the sehan was just. wow. w o w. i cannot stress this enough. :|b
it's pretty but morbid at the same time and just. wow.

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binarysun August 21 2012, 23:43:30 UTC
yes it does! It's so sad how baektao isn't shipped more ;_; and thank you!!
and oh wow thank you again and just wow I didn't mean for it to be so morbid because it was supposed to be more fantasy-like but I...guess it had more of an impact this way, ahaha. thank you for reading n' stuff oh my gosh /squirms with happy

:|b (stealing that from you, going to start using that from now on heh)

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