Nothing is as it Seems

Mar 28, 2013 22:54

Title: Nothing is as it Seems
Pairing: Kai/Kyunsoo
Genre: romance, comedy, slight angst
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Thanks to OrioleEnsor for editing
Word Count: 9822
Summary: Jongin, known as Kai to most people, was good at what he did, even though his friends considered what he did stupid and unethical. He couldn't change the fact that he was ( Read more... )

genre: romance, rating: nc-17, length: oneshot, pairing: kaisoo

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biigbanng March 29 2013, 18:06:48 UTC
gaaaah thank you for your lovely comment! <3
You've made my day :)

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xxhna March 29 2013, 18:43:40 UTC
Awwww this is cute. I love the way you wrote the characters.

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biigbanng March 29 2013, 18:51:50 UTC
yaaaay I'm glad you liked it! :D
thank youuuu

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peanut133 March 29 2013, 19:53:27 UTC
I absolutely love the fics where kyungsoo is not just a little hopeless thing until he meets jongin.
i really enjoyed reading this <3

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biigbanng March 29 2013, 20:14:24 UTC
I know what you mean about Kyungsoo! That's why I tried to stay away from that.
I'm glad you enjoyed reading it and thanks for your comment, bb :)

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senpaimitsuji March 29 2013, 23:40:37 UTC
hahhh interesting storyline

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biigbanng March 30 2013, 00:17:20 UTC
thanks for reading and commenting!! :)

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biigbanng March 30 2013, 02:56:47 UTC
no, I totally don't mind. I completely appreciate your constructive criticism. :)

cause you sort of described it all in one paragraph ahah omg I did not realize that. Around that scene, I had no idea where to go or how to get to my desired ending.

I had a feeling the ending was rushed :/ It was my first oneshot, so hopefully next time I can avoid that!

Thank you so much for reading and for your comment. I'm glad you mentioned those few things. I wish you had read it before I posted lol

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biigbanng March 31 2013, 03:25:23 UTC
gaaah! stop being so nice to me!
thanks <3
btw, tried to join your community but I don't think I can?

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