stupid poem I wrote

[bigpimpinnizam]

This is a poem i decided to write at 12:30 am sunday night becuase ive been feeling like writing a poem and have nothing to write about its not very good but id like some feed back and some idea for a title

My heart burns inside with a passion for her

Comments

[oxsunshiinexo]

Aww Nizam...

Check your first class...

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♥ Kris

[just__ask]

thats a good poem Nizam

[chicaxbonita]

aw i loved your poem! it makes me feel bad for not writing latley... i'm such a slacker!

♥ miss you!!

[bigpimpinnizam]

yeah you slacker. its all good ♥

[insamnia]

wow. nizam.
thats great.
and i write music everyday,
so its good.
you did well.
and it was rad.

i, and im not just saying this, but i caould cry...
if you were to change the male words to female, and the female to male, id feel your pain so much more...

youre so stellarly awesome.
sam

[bigpimpinnizam]

stellarly awesome i liek that lol

[insamnia]

you better like that.

[lostrustysponge]

Thats great, how long did it take up to write that?

[bigpimpinnizam]

thanks i think like 10- 15 mins with some thought. and i was like making up words in my head all day