{ full circle } minho/taemin

Sep 19, 2010 15:26

full circle
3,711w
pg 13, au
prompt: For some reason, I’m trembling today
I think something good will happen…
- Wowowow // SHINee
a/n: written for the first challenge at shawol_haven!
So this fic...partly, I've always wanted to do something in this kind of universe, since I love the movie 21, because I'm a nerd. Also, I wanted to honor my bbgirls 2NE1 LOL. Yeah. ( Read more... )

fandom: shinee, length: oneshot, pairing: minho/taemin

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lenniemoo September 19 2010, 23:35:16 UTC
OMFG YOU WROTE SOMETHING /spazzes out (will comment after reading)

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lenniemoo September 19 2010, 23:47:39 UTC
I WILL VOTE FOR YOU, THIS IS BRILLIANT, I LOVE YOU GODDAMIT YOU ARE GENIUS

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tuesdayhero September 20 2010, 00:29:58 UTC
LOL omg 8D ♥♥♥
this is a great first comment, thank you so very much ^__^

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ninnarin September 19 2010, 23:45:20 UTC
so im going to leave spot here k ? XD
my head is spinning like round round round @.@ will read it later~

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ninnarin September 20 2010, 03:13:30 UTC
lol- seriously. I'm in love with this x3
though im kinda confused -dunno, maybe bcuz i felt very dizzy rn- but then when i re-read it again, i understood :D

you are simply awesome bb :')
write more~ specially 2min x3

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tuesdayhero September 20 2010, 03:40:05 UTC
yeah its a little confusing, i apologize for that x_x i'm relieved that you understood it the second time :)

lol i most certainly will write more 2min ;) thank you so much for reading ♥

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HAHAHAH I made you wait for commentary >:D sundaybananza September 20 2010, 00:24:34 UTC
OKAY. First of all I must start out this comment with sadness. Why? BECAUSE YOU DIDN'T SPOT ME ): /remembers these things because they hurt. NOBUTSRSLY it's honestly your most realisitc fic and I LOVEEE The formatting you did with it. Every single scene was like part of a whole mini-movie, like honestly I want to see this acted out wafoihwafoiaf. TAEMIN. MADE. ME. SAD. Idk how minho dealt with his addiction, like that'd seriously drive me crazy D: but he kept through because he's minho and amazing and <333

"The man dressed in the impeccable black suit shot another kick into his stomach, then flung the back of his hand against Taemin's cheek, made his head slam back into the wall behind him."

THIS MADE ME SADFACE SO HARD. waifohwaoihaw I was so waiting for minho to just come inand kick some ass hahaha, and I'm allowed to infer that he did because you can't tell me what to think :D<3 JONGKEY IS YOUR BEST SECONDARY CHARACTER COUPLE AND I GREATLY APPROVE OF THEM BECAUSE THEYRE THE CUTEST FUNNIEST PAIRING IN THE WORLD. HANDS DOWN ( ... )

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Re: HAHAHAH I made you wait for commentary >:D sundaybananza September 20 2010, 00:25:56 UTC
It'd never be easy for Taemin, Minho knows, but he tells himself that things can't be that bad, when Taemin is nestled in the sheets next to him, and a pack of cards may be clenched in one of his hands, but in the other is Minho's hand.

I LIED. I CAN'T BELIEVE I FORGOT TO MENTION THIS 5 SECONDS AGO. THATS A BEAUTIFUL SENTENCE AND DESERVES TO BE ETCHED INTO MY MEMORY. True love makes me <3

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Re: HAHAHAH I made you wait for commentary >:D tuesdayhero September 20 2010, 00:29:07 UTC
ONEW IS THERE. ONEW IS THE ONE THAT WON ALL OF TAEMIN'S MONEY LMAO. And they were playing poker not blackjack so I couldn't make him yell "Winner winner chicken dinner!!" lmao :(

I have too many serious fics. I need to work on my humor ones again XD HOW COME I NEVER FINISH THOSE? and i agree, i love writing jongkey as a side pairing because they are lulz and i love them.

and omg winning isnt everything ok >:|

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Re: HAHAHAH I made you wait for commentary >:D sundaybananza September 20 2010, 00:32:40 UTC
LOL I kind of assumed he was, I wasn't positive though XD

but omg I was so looking forward to that line /sadface ):

and uhm, it kind of is, if you're a TRUE winner. ;D heheheh, jkjk, I still count finding the most attractive asian man in the world and making him fall in love with you even though you have one fucked up problem kind of the greatest win in the world. GO TEAM TAEMIN~ :D<3

IDC IF MY COMMENT JUST LACKED SENSE, IT SHOULD MAKE SENSE TO YOU AND I. remotely <<

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top_fifty September 20 2010, 01:26:44 UTC
OMFG YOU UPDATED. SPOT HEHE

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top_fifty September 20 2010, 13:57:27 UTC
omg this is an another amazing fic from you ;_; i love how you write your fics with unusual setting or plot. idek you're just genius amazing etcetc. please keep writing more 2min <3

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undistanced September 20 2010, 02:51:52 UTC
Wow, just...wow.

I have been waiting so long to read a good 2Min fic and you've brought it, I just <3 I don't comment a lot so bare with me ;;

I am really jealous of your writing style. It flows and it really gets to me. I adore how you describe everything and the dialogue was adorable, especially when Minho and Taemin were teasing with one another. And my god, near the end, you executed the prompt perfectly and kya, it made me flail >w< I like these kind of AUs too, which made it even more fun for me to read :D

I feel defeated in a way, when I read this. I haven't even submitted my entry, but after reading this, I think you deserve to win. Guess I'm gonna have to wait for the next challenge :)

Hope you win the challenge, I'll definitely be voting for you :D

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tuesdayhero September 20 2010, 03:38:22 UTC
no no no that's a bad idea! you should always try your best at everything you do, please don't give up D: you never know what might happen. don't just write to win, write for yourself :3

but yes, thank you so much for this comment ♥ i write AUs too much LOL XD but i'm glad that you enjoyed it :) i'm also glad that i executed the prompt alright, phew~

thank you so much darling for this comment, and please submit your entry! it's at least a good opportunity to introduce the community to your writing. fighting!! i'll be on the lookout for it ;) ♥♥♥

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