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the_archandroid November 7 2010, 16:52:57 UTC
I LOVE nu!Jim, he's so honest when it comes to spock and so so willing to share his feelings. I think we can directly attribute this to losing spock this early He was humbled very early on so it's quite possible he'll never achieve the levels of hubris that Prime!Jim has, but he still has the bluster and the dynamism.

LOVED: the crack about JIm's weight, spock is sooo a chubby chaser, he can't even deny it
adored Spock's desire to meld with Jim upon hearing his mind is dynamic
TANE! SMILING!! we'll crack through that stockholm syndrome yet!

And again so creative with the idea of souls having a measurable dimensionality in this universe, and BAMF Prime!Spock's soul being the most intense.

Loving the nods to old trek
"Jim, your name is Jim"
and I-chaya.

Also loving the beginning of banter btw. Jim and Spock re: Jim's tender ass and levitating. REALLY cool.

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prue84 November 14 2010, 04:56:05 UTC
Every chapter of this deserve a coherent, long review, but I can't, I simply can't. This story is beyond the average story you can review so you may not hear me until the final chapter. <3

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shatfat December 24 2010, 09:03:10 UTC
“Wise men store up knowledge, but the mouth of a fool invites ruin.”

Tone perfect.

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