Hahahaha. Jim is hilarious in this story. And adorable. I think, too, that this is the first ever story in which I thought SAREK was hilarious. Fruit basket! Hahahaha. ♥
Oh, I just adored this. I think its brevity helped emphasize the characters...and that confession had me wibbling. I love this universe. Er...universes.
:D I'm happy you approve! And yep, it's short and sweet because there's not much more to write about except lots and lots of sex, and I fail at sex scenes for the most part. \o
I'm glad you didn't add any. I think sometimes a fic is spoiled when the author tries to cram in hours and hours of sexytiems just for the fun of it at the end. I can never finish it if that's the case. And it is a terribly awkward experience writing it.
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