Comments | biggy_chan: One Shot: Don't forget me (Part 4)

biggy_chan

One Shot: Don't forget me (Part 4)

May 02, 2010 22:08

( Part 4 - End )

# one-shot, fanfic, p: akame

Comments 61

kyu_x May 2 2010, 20:50:55 UTC

SPOT
this seems very interesting!
WIll read it with time tomorrow c:
♥

kyu_x May 3 2010, 13:31:27 UTC

just finished reading it.
I love the ending ;___;

“I'm Jin.”

You revealed the flower you had hid behind your back and held it in front of him.

He looked at it.

He looked back at you.

A single pink rose.

It meant everything to you. It was the symbol of your memory. Even if he didn't remember you still remembered. You would always remember it. For you and for him. You could remember it for the two of you.

You wanted to be with him for the rest of his life. You would be his memory.

I love you.

“Jin.”

This part. I love it.
Thanks for sharing!

♥

biggy_chan May 3 2010, 14:40:19 UTC

I love the ending as well :) I thought it would be perfect to end it like this
Thank you for reading ^^ I'm happy you liked it!

yumenokoe May 2 2010, 21:19:42 UTC

nee.. You made me cry :') But he still remembered him in the end ^^ it's good... this brings back a few painful memories of mine *cries* but it was beautiful!
thanks for sharing! :')

biggy_chan May 3 2010, 07:33:23 UTC

I'm sorry for making you cry :) *gives cookies and tissue*
But I'm happy that you liked it ^^
Don't cry :D
Thank you for reading!

paoktsou May 2 2010, 21:21:02 UTC

This fic is one of the most amazing i've ever read!!♥♥♥
akame is love!♥!♥! although it hurts so much♥♥
it has got such a strong feeling!!
it's so beautifull!!♥
i love it so much!!
keep going my friend!!♥

biggy_chan May 3 2010, 07:34:46 UTC

Thank you :D I'm glad you liked it ^^
And also thanks for reading! I'll give my best for future fanfics :)

lanheart May 2 2010, 21:24:12 UTC

beautiful yet heartbreaking
i love how you end the story :)

biggy_chan May 3 2010, 07:35:56 UTC

Thank you :D
I'm really glad that you liked it ^^

tsuki_no_michi May 2 2010, 21:38:44 UTC

Okay~ I'm not really a person who comments on fics very often but this time I just have to.

This story was just totally beautiful and really touching and the way you described Jin's feelings was just so real that I had to cry in the end.

Thanks for posting it. ^-^

biggy_chan May 3 2010, 07:38:57 UTC

Thank you a lot for commenting :D I really appreciate it!
And I'm happy that you liked it :)
Thank you for reading ^^