day seven. "A Good Team"

Sep 05, 2010 09:26

Title: A Good Team
Pairing(s): Neji + Lee, Past Lee x Sakura
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Summary: How does a man go from being a private investigator to a self appointed defender of the masses? He gets targeted by a gang for just doing his job though the fact that he’s a Hyuga doesn’t seem to help anything. Throw in an old friend who’s looking for ( Read more... )

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queroli September 9 2010, 07:38:19 UTC
Usually first person bugs me, but I really liked Neji's voice. I think you pulled off the AU extremely well ( Not that I know ANYTHING about PIs. |D ) yet still retained elements of the original story's canon. The little details too, like how he notices a knife hidden in his opponent's boot, together they really make the fic.

Title says it all. Love the relationship between Batman and Robin Neji and Lee - their teamwork despite their differences. And how Lee is always looking for a challenge, it's very him. The karaoke scene, although brief, made me smile. Where Lee manages to source a tambourine from will remain a mystery that even Neji cannot solve. ;o

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