Comments | big_pink: SPN fic: Red 5/10

big_pink

SPN fic: Red 5/10

Oct 25, 2006 19:19

The Suits: have the complete right to claim ownership over the Winchesters. To my eternal sorrow, I know that.

Warning! It’s PG-13, but it’s dancing a fine line. Gen, kids in dangerous situations, swearing, adult content, violence. WIP, will be 10 chapters.

The Puppeteers: Those two people with their hands up my back are lemmypie and jmm0001. ( Read more... )

red, supernatural, fanfic

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big_pink October 27 2006, 00:12:07 UTC

So great that everyone thinks Ludovic is suitably creepy...I feel...content. As for what compels him to latch onto Dean? Well, part of me smiles and looks around the fandom and thinks, 'uh-huh.' But how does any stalker choose his/her target? There's no logic to it, really, eh?

Sam will start to play more into the story as we move the action more into the present day. More soon, I hope. This story is driving me, too.

kimonkey7 October 26 2006, 07:28:09 UTC

Damn it. Damn and holy jesus god, but this is a beautiful fic. It is the kind of fic that is distracting to read because the whole time I'm thinking, this is beautiful, just right, so much good and why can't I write like this, iI want to write a story like this, a story this good and yeah...

There's no elloquence in that babbling above, I know, it is babbling true and real. Because that is what this fic is doing to me.

Wonderful and wonderful and wonderful again.

Thank you.

big_pink October 27 2006, 00:15:24 UTC

Wow, well, now I'm blushing. THANKS. I'm glad that whatever gets regurgitated out my laptop gives anyone ANY pleasure. Lots of thanks should go to the betas, as well, because honestly, it would be just a lot of breathless..."and then, and then...and then!!!" Seriously, I can't thank them enough. They rein in the worst of my excesses and push me when I need it. And point out the obviously wrong and the subtly incorrect.

iyalode October 26 2006, 11:24:25 UTC

Eep. So glad Cadillac's are uncommon here, that 'being inside an animal' description of yours freaked me right out.

Loved how you linked all three years with The Wolf confronting Dean, you allowed us no respite at all. You are teh evol! It also really rammed home how this showdown's been a long time coming.

big_pink October 27 2006, 00:17:18 UTC

I hate Cadillacs. Really, really hate them. It's been a pleasure to expose one as the rolling pit of Satan's sin. Although I'm very fond of all 3 storylines, we're almost done with them and ready to let present day take center stage. And to give Sam something to do that's not brow-furrowing and emo posturing.

ghostofashark October 26 2006, 21:48:39 UTC

God, I love how scary everything was in this chapter. Before I even knew half of what Ludovic was doing he scared me to death, and now I’m even more scared. I just love that he’s so creepy without being all cartoon villain evil. I actually had to stop reading in the middle of the 1997 confrontation between Dean and Ludovic because I was so scared of what was about to happen. And then Dean was (temporarily?) saved, and I smiled like an idiot. And once again, I really have to compliment you on your ability to make the situations and feelings described really come to life, just reading about the granny in the tree brought out my fear of heights ( ... )

big_pink October 27 2006, 00:20:20 UTC

Ummm. Ice cream. The great motivator. I can't tell you the things I've accomplished for a pint of Pralines and Cream. Glad to be of service. Uh, now that mid-terms are nearing an end, does this mean I can slack off? No?

quellefromage October 26 2006, 22:05:52 UTC

Aieeee!! and also, due caffe. (that's the oly Italian I know so far besides grappa. Molto grappa.

So, Molto story!!

I love how you actually wrote, "Oh, Dean." so that we could quote you and say, "Oh, Dean." Oh Dean!!

Oh, Dean, talking baseball to the pedophile wolfie. And, oh Dean, hearing HER after all these years, and oh, Dean, what the hell are you playing at now?

And Oh, Sam, watch the HELL out. And oh crap, this cannot end well.

I need due grappa, just to get through this.

(Damn, Rome is dirty and noisy and OLD as hell, and pretty damned cool. I can swear alot because I went to the Vatican today. )

big_pink October 27 2006, 00:22:09 UTC

You totally posted twice, girlie-girl. LOVE IT. Er, don't you have WAY better stuff to be doing in Roma than read this tripe? Really? Have you got your man on a Vespa yet? C'mon! I want photographic PROOF!!!

OH QUELLEFROMAGE! Have some vino for me!

quellefromage October 27 2006, 05:54:57 UTC

If I want my man to DIE, I will get him a Vespa. I've never seen anything like how these people drive. It's like the Italian Job all the time. On the sidewalks, down the one way streets the wrong way, cutting in and out of traffic like crazy people. I've seen at least three wrecks, and why I haven't seen more...well, I guess I'm not paying attention.

Last night the internet was being very Italian and decided that it would give me an error message everytime I posted...so,I tried again, and for all I knew, it still didn't work. I wanted you to have the love, since I was all full of the grappa. It totally had NOTHING to do with all the grappa. Really.

Today I get to fall down the Spanish Steps. Pictures at 11.