Well written innuendo is a wonderful thing and you have done a great job here. The pacing of this is excellent and even with dialogue only there is richness to the scene because I can 'hear' the nuances of their tones as the conversation progresses.
Thank you. I always end up feeling I should have left a few more words in than are strictly necessary, but with drabbels having to strip everything down to the bare necessities to get the word count, it is good to know it still manages to come across :).
Hee hee!! Very nice and I love the all dialogue drabbles!! I was freaked out when I had to write one the first time, but I really love them. This is great and I so hear them saying this. Love the "firm grip military assest" line. Heh!!
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Very enjoyable and clever work. Thank you.
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