Eternally in Debt - Chapter Four

Nov 28, 2007 21:52

Title: Eternally in Debt
Author: biancamasuda
Fandom: NewS
Pairing: Ryo Nishikido×Takahisa Masuda, Takahisa Masuda×Yuya Tegoshi
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: WHAT THE HECK IS A DISCLAIMER? Just kidding. There's a dictionary.com, did you know that?
Summary: Takahisa Masuda finds himself stuck in a very difficult relationship with Ryo Nishikido. But after lending a ( Read more... )

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quiraikotsu November 29 2007, 17:04:37 UTC
ascasdJHV AVSD OMGOMGOMGOMGOM NEW CHAPTER OUT I LOVE I LOVE
I LOVE THIS
I LOVE YOU
AKJSCJKASKDN
YAYAYAYAY
OMG
THE PLOT TWISTS <3<3<3

“Perhaps you’ll fall off a shelf trying to get shampoo?”
“Oh, that was once. Shut up.” Takahisa frowned. How embarrassing.
LOL. AND.
“Well…ok.” He said instead of saying “I’ve been horny for you for days.”
I LOVE. I LOVE <3<3
lol ryo is like a sexual predator xD

MOAR FIC PREEZ??

p.s. wahhhhhh new puppy! I remember when we first got ours... she was carsick on my lap when we first took her home >___> but utterly adorable
what's his/her name??
<3<3 =]

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biancamasuda November 29 2007, 19:15:56 UTC
Ryo is a sexual predator?!?! Wasn't Masuda thinking the "I've been horny for you for days." line?!?!

Aww no!! Your puppy got carsick?!?!?! Our puppy was totally fine, wanting to sit by himself, HAHAHA. He's so adventurous!!!!

Ah, his name is Hiroki. It's so bizarre, because I had to type that name in this chapter, and I'm like "MY DOG?!?!?!"

AND THANK YOU. I LOVE YOU TOO. AND YOUR COMMENTS <333

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quiraikotsu November 29 2007, 22:24:59 UTC
Waitaminute Hiroki?? Isn't that the name of one of the NewS members that left.... BUT I CANT REMEMBER WHO *SHOT* NOOO
I so want to call my pets Japanese names too~ But they don't respond to anything but their original names anymore =___=
If I ever get another pet I'll call them Shige or Massu <3 Or Tesshi <3<3

p.s. LOL MASSU IS A SECRET SEXUAL PREDATOR ITS IN HIS SUBCONSCIOUSNESS.

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biancamasuda November 30 2007, 02:22:10 UTC
Hahaha. Hiroki is Uchi's first name? And NO he didn't leave! He wants to come back. I KNOW IT. NewS is not NewS without him. 6 doesn't satisfy me!!!

Hahaha, well my sister picked out the name, and it's a cute name so I don't mind.

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rin223 November 29 2007, 23:49:36 UTC
moshikashite....RYO IS KOYAMA'S BRO?!

hope i didn't get that wrong...

ah the koyamaxpi parts are so cute!! lol. even tho they're just friends.

hehe. wonder if ryo realizes that he's a vampire...

poor massu~!!! yuya, come to the rescue!!!
haha. it's so strange to see yuya instead of tegoshi. but THAT IS his name...

AWWW CUTE PUPPY!!!!

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biancamasuda November 30 2007, 02:23:34 UTC
PERHAPS RYO IS KOYAMA'S BROTHER?! WHO KNOWS. YOU KNOW!?

Hahahaha.

Yeah I like the Koyama×Yamapi parts a lot too. I like seeing more characters. I'M SICK OF RYO. Just kidding. HAHA.

I like Yuya. I use it all the time. It's one of my favourite names in the whole world. I *ADORE* it. I don't know why. I adore it.

And thank you! He's cute, but he's kind of an asswipe, HAHA.

Thanks for reading <333

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junno_aiba88 November 30 2007, 05:53:04 UTC
OH MY GOD... MASSU BEIN KIDNAP BY RYO'S MAN.... OMG.... RYO FASTER SAVE MASSU... i really hope that when ryo cant find massu.. he will be panicked... hope that ryo really care about massu ne.. wait for the next chapter.. ^^

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biancamasuda December 1 2007, 05:12:03 UTC
Yeah I'm sure Ryo will be panicked. We all know Ryo loves Masuda, it's just that he expresses it oddly.

Thanks for reading!!!

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oofle December 2 2007, 02:13:09 UTC
This was so great...you're so brilliant! I'm so jealous that you have time to write such entertaining fics. I swear I'll finish mine one day...anyways write the next part fast because I need something to read in between studying.

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biancamasuda December 2 2007, 18:29:12 UTC
I'm sad you can't write. GET TIME TO WRITE DANG YOU. I understand you don't have time though! School and all! When I'm back, I don't know if I'm going to be writing as much as I can now =(.

I'll try and write quick. But I'm lazy. Don't shoot me?

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oofle December 3 2007, 00:14:13 UTC
I can afford to shoot you...I need a johnnys friend around.

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uchihi December 2 2007, 11:58:28 UTC
LOOVE your story!!!!
Creative, funny, and yet, you successfully made RyoMassu into a 'normal pairing' in my head^^ I'm looking forward for more TegoMass>< Ryochan is vampire ne? So will there be vampire x vampire ^^ hahaha like they will biting each other^^ hahaha ow whatever dont mind me!
Good job! Looking forward for next chappie!

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biancamasuda December 2 2007, 18:30:56 UTC
Normal pairing!!! EEEK. Hahaha. I know, I'm even warming up to it! And dang do I hate this pairing. I'm obsessed with weird pairings though, so this isn't a first =D.

Vampire×Vampire?!?!?! Who and who??!?!?! Ryo is a Vamp...and Yuya is a vamp...they aren't getting together!?!?!? I'm confused, now?

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