Gorgeous. I love your imagery and the way your character FEELS and THINKS. It makes for a fantastic read, seeing sensations and ideas laid out that flicker through your mind or your own body throughout your lifetime, set so starkly to paper. This is just fabulous!! GODS. LOVE IT.
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I was more into poetry before I started writing fiction, so maybe that's why my language is so.. embellished :')
Posting the new part now :)
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