Rehab, Ch. 6

[bianca_fiore]

The staring contest continued for what may have been a few glistening seconds or many shadowed hours.

Then he collapsed, his head making a sickening crack on her bed rail before finally becoming good friends with the speckle-patterned floor.

Minako blinked.

Maybe she should help him. Oh, wait, he had her strapped to the bed. So, too bad, so sad

Comments

[jenbunny]

What's going to happen next! I need to know, can't wait for more ^__^ I loved it.

[bianca_fiore]

Thank you! I was worried it was too ANGSTANGSTANGST.

As to what happens next, I haven't decided yet. Maybe I should take a leaf out of V's book and have a CYOA.

[jenbunny]

Works for me ^_^, I enjoyed that CYOA ... of course I'd probably enjoy anything you chose to write ^___^

[lovelylytton]

You're back, you're back!
*beams*

She thought he looked as if he had aged years in minutes. Though he had looked distinctly ruffled before, now he looked like he had gotten hit by a bus. Only to be pushed in front of another bus.
This line is a perfect example of how you combine the tragic and the comedic. I just got home from uni, and to see this on my flist made me squee so hard that the neighbours must have heard me.
Now I can only second Jen in asking: what's next? :)

[bianca_fiore]

Yes, I'm just home from uni, too! Finally some time to write. At uni it just would sit in my "Saved" folder and glare menacingly.

I'm thrilled I made you squee. And I hope your neighbors heard so that they may be jealous of your squeeing ability. I know I am. ;).

CYOA? Hehe.

[lovelylytton]

Will more squeeing make you more inspired and thus propel the next part into existence? If so, my neighbours are in for a hell of a ride.

[bianca_fiore]

Yes. Squeeing makes my world go round. Everyone wears earplugs there.

[venusorbit1]

STOKED. There is a new chapter!!!

I don't know what to say other than to gush and thank you for updating. I like that whatever inkling Kunzite had of who he is finally surfaced, and that it's a gut punch. Neat way to have the memory surface, too: I guess the "Venus" part is what cracked the shell, and now I'm eagerly awaiting finding out what happens next.

[bianca_fiore]

Gut punch. What a nice way to say he got a concussion from memory regaining.

It was a long time coming. The story would just pout at me whenever I saw it and opened another document.

The next part may be a while. I have two possible scenarios: one insane, one angsty.

Also, I'm thinking more and more about an outtake explaining Hotaru's hand.

[venusorbit1]

Well they are in an asylum. I vote insane!

[lovelylytton]

And I vote angsty!

[mai_ran]

N-no-NO! It can't stop here!!! Please please please continue. I loves it and I needs to know what happens next!