Rehab, Ch. 3

Jul 03, 2009 22:32

Minako awoke the next day to the shrieks of her “neighbor”, Milly. Milly believed she was Kou Seiya, and started each day with a song, though the song usually sounded more like Artemis when he was given a bath.  And Artemis hated baths.

Soon, the shrieks were curtailed, and the nurse whom Minako believed smiled too much came in with a cheery: “ ( Read more... )

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venusorbit1 July 4 2009, 04:29:25 UTC
Bianca, really? Really? You're going to do me like this? Really?

Milly's a nice touch, as is the orange "Banyan Crazy House" T-shirt. I'm loving Minako's attitude because I have a feeling I'd act the same way when if I was ever committed.

Anyway, back to my: Really? You're going to end there? Please tell me you're just formatting the next part and then you're going to post, because I'm going to go streetrat crazy if you don't show who the musician is.

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bianca_fiore July 4 2009, 05:06:45 UTC
Um..lemme think....Yes!

Actually, it lime green with orange lettering.

And I have a vague idea of who the musician is: Should I go with the obvious choice, or the OTHER obvious choice? Or the OTHER OTHER obvious choice? Or maybe the SEMI-OBVIOUS choice? Hmmm. Decisions, Decisions.

I'm glad you liked Milly. I had fun with her.

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venusorbit1 July 5 2009, 06:49:54 UTC
The obvious choice! Occom's Razor! Wait, is the obvious choice Adonis? Because fuck that guy. She'll only go crazier.

Oh and update, plz.

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sugarcross July 4 2009, 09:53:56 UTC
I am in shock that you cut this part short and leave it with such a cliffhanger! Questions rage in my heart as to how you plan to unravel everything. Echoing V above to the details of Minako's clothes and the Milly character. In fact, all the OCs here are such a delight to read.

“Seiya-san, Aino-san is very disturbed and must remain here. Although, I am sure that your voice soothes her each morning.”
I laughed so hard reading his remark. He is the devil doctor in a mad house who enjoys toying with her though he knows(?) she does not belong there. Definitely look forward to more of such amusing exchange in this fic!

Who is the musician? Is it Rei? Michiru? Or one of the Starlights? I need to know it now!

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bianca_fiore July 11 2009, 00:11:44 UTC
Who is the musician? Is it Rei? Michiru? Or one of the Starlights? I need to know it now!

You'll see. ;)

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lovelylytton July 4 2009, 11:41:51 UTC
And which shitennou is the musician? *grins*
I'd say it's Nephrite.

This chapter had a very funny opening and was altogether a treat for me (I don't like the Starlights much, so this light mockery of Seya was something I enjoyed).

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bianca_fiore July 11 2009, 00:13:44 UTC
Who says it's a Shitennou? ;)

Light mockery of Seiya is a joy.

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