Rehab, Ch. 2

[bianca_fiore]

Minako took a steadying breath, though that was hard to do when one was strapped to a chair. Although she was still attempting to come to grips with her traitor turned therapist, Minako had decided that allowing Him to know that was out of the question.

Even though in the back of her mind she admitted that she had let the bat out of the bag when

Comments

[venusorbit1]

Oh hell yeah! This one keeps getting better; I especially love the back and forth dialogue. Minako gets off some serious burns, too:

“Are you a prostitute?”
“Only in men’s fantasies.”
“Are you addicted to drugs?”
“Are you?”

Those lines are absolutely perfect. I love how delightfully defiant she is, which is completely in character and makes it feel like she is a prisoner rather than a patient. And he knows what he's doing, too: he got the reaction he wanted out of her.
U rule now I have to pimp this too!

[bianca_fiore]

I'm so glad you liked. I really had fun with the dialogue!

Yay! More pimping! I'm honoured.

[jenbunny]

Oh my! I am really loving this story! ^_^ I can't wait to read more.

[bianca_fiore]

Thanks! Now I just have to figure out what to write! ;)

[elvisvf101]

venusorbit1 turned me on to this fic, and she was right, as usual. You've done an excellent job creating intrigue, and I'm definitely eager for more.

I hope you don't mind that I've friended. I'd very much like to follow this, and anything else you write.

[bianca_fiore]

Thank you! I'm happy you like it enough to use such an awesome descriptive word as "intrigue". It gave me the chills!

I don't mind at all. Actually, I already follow you on ff.net and have been meaning to friend you for some time.

[lovelylytton]

Looking at her, his eyes turned to steel and quickly, much too quickly, he lunged at her, bringing his face within inches of her own.
Well well... If that isn't a bit of Kunzite shining through the doctor. Excellent!
The dialogue in this was so snarky and I wonder how long poor Mina has to be stuck in there. Of course, I hope it's over the length of several chapters. ;)
Can't wait to see where you take this, but let me say that I love the weird dynamic that they have established already.

[bianca_fiore]

I think it might end up being several chapters! I have a rough timeline and some of the scenes I'm planning I don't want to happen for a while.

Thanks for commenting and I'm ecstatic you're liking it so far!

[sea_thoughts]

Oooh! I like this premise, intriguing!

But where's Part One? ;_;

[bianca_fiore]

Oops! Forgot to link it! I posted it earlier, yikes! A link will soon be present here!