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bianca_fiore

Too Late

Feb 16, 2009 02:43

Title: Too Late
Genre: Angst
Pairings: Uranus/Neptune, Senshi Shitennou
Rating: PG-13. It is a bit graphic
A/N: 'Promises' arc.

( The Last She Remembers Is Saturn's Glaive Hitting the Ground )

fanfiction, outers, uranus, moon kingdom, sm

Comments 2

lovelylytton February 16 2009, 10:35:48 UTC

The end of the SilMil being told through the eyes of the Outers is a very nice touch, and I also like how you've positioned the inners next to their lovers in death. I wonder why Neptune was so insistent of the shitennou being able to reincarnated?

I really liked this, thanks for sharing!

bianca_fiore February 16 2009, 16:49:49 UTC

I always imagined two separate scenarios playing out: either the Outers dying first on the Border, or barely escaping but too late to save the Princess. You could see which one I favor more.

As to Neptune's insistence, maybe there will be another drabble explaining that reasoning.

Thank you! It was written during a bout of insomnia, I was afraid it would not be that good.