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#5 Theme 3: Beauty and Stupid - hide; Tora/Hiroto

Apr 26, 2009 00:12

Title: Slowly Sinking In
Author: beyondtheremix
Theme: 003 Beauty and Stupid (hide)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Tora/Hiroto
Band[s]: Alice Nine
Disclaimer: AU, violence, non-con, angst, memory loss
Comments: Best read at a slow pace I guess :\

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50stories, tora/hiroto, alice nine

Comments 20

brokenmaelstrom April 26 2009, 15:33:12 UTC

;_;
This is so sad... so tragic. Why do we always do this to them? XDD
I like the way it's written <3

beyondtheremix April 26 2009, 16:04:38 UTC

I know >____<
But we have to get it out somehow...

Thank you for reading!!!!!!<3

superhappynao April 26 2009, 22:34:08 UTC

This is great!!!!
At first it's difficult to see where it's going but that's not a bad thing XD the description is so well written that it's just like how you'd have memories fly past in your head :D
I think that how you've separated the writing works like that too; it's just like how you'd see things in your mind. The mystery of it all until the very end... I love that a lot!
And despite Tora's actions being full of confusion and rage there has always and always will be love in there. Such a bitter-sweet ending - It's great :D good job!!!

beyondtheremix April 27 2009, 01:16:00 UTC

Yay! Someone else who gets it!!!!<3333 For some reason I've been wanting to write things mixed up like that for a while X) I've got one for the theme "Son of a Bitch" by Miyavi I've started that'll maybe be like this >_>

Heh :) It's fun to make the reader think~ Like a giant puzzle + a scavenger hunt! You don't really know what's going on until you've reached the end, but then you still have to reread it again to find all the little clues and details.

Thanks for reading!!!<33333333