#19 Theme 41: Should I Love Him? - Namie Amuro; Tora/Hiroto

Nov 27, 2009 20:27

Title: Sweet Sleep
Author: beyondtheremix
Theme: 041 Should I Love Him? (Namie Amuro)
Rating: PG
Pairing: Tora/Hiroto
Band[s]: Alice Nine
Disclaimer: fluff
Comments: One night in a day.

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50stories, tora/hiroto, alice nine

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Comments 41

unna_rainchaser November 28 2009, 09:05:06 UTC
Now this was truly beautiful; had a quiet yet restless vibe but a mushy ending.

Just lovely. Going to my mems.

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beyondtheremix November 29 2009, 00:23:41 UTC
ahaha icky muuuush and why thank you ;D

... my journal has recently decided to eat my fics and archive and subtly replace them with a tiny 'span'... T_T hopefully memories can keep them alive. Thanks for reading :]

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kawasakininja November 28 2009, 16:51:46 UTC
I like the way you wrote this, how you worded things like here Sliding out into the nippy air Tora hung back in front of the hotel, wishing the other two a polite goodnight in favor of a quick smoke and a missed elevator ride in awkward silence., some parts more detailed than others and just nice overall feeling.

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beyondtheremix November 29 2009, 00:27:29 UTC
XD oh ho thank you for reading~
I admit I get a bit rambly without sleep, so I just started cramming words into sentences. LOL must revise all my nonsense someday XD

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bauci November 28 2009, 20:50:22 UTC
OH. Nice idea and what a quiet melancholy mood to get lost into. The ending was perfect. I'm glad I saved this as my last fic before going to bed, it was so right.

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beyondtheremix November 29 2009, 00:40:08 UTC
Awww. I like the idea too, but I probably should have given myself more time to write it all out ^^; At least comments are encouraging. My journal has started to eat itself up so I've been thinking of just deleting and giving up on it completely lol

Hmm what else... thank you for reading! and your comments! I would ask your opinion of the unfinished folderful of fics, but I suppose I'd rather they simmer for a while XD

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bauci November 29 2009, 06:35:46 UTC
Honey where's this insecurity coming from, from what I've read you have no reason for it. Don't delete it, I haven't saved a lot of it :P

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beyondtheremix November 29 2009, 15:42:00 UTC
THE INTERNET IS FUCKING WITH MY MIND.
*snort* that is all I have to say. I'm pasting up fics my journal has been deleting as I write this. But thank you for the support♥ I get frustrated I guess is all XD Here's a
(preview) because you are too sweet ;P

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beyondtheremix December 8 2009, 00:33:40 UTC
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww<3333
DON'T BE SORRY!!!!!! XD!!! I really appreciate everyone's comment, really! I do! And I'm no stranger to writing comments three times your size so don't worrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry!!!!! ahahaha comments make me happy :D! That's why all my stories are public ^_^ So I hope you'll keep reading and that I'll hear from you again!!!

Thanks for reading<3333

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beyondtheremix December 8 2009, 22:40:38 UTC
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY :D!

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bellcheria March 2 2010, 11:01:59 UTC
Ahwww this is cute <3 I liked the first half soooo much because of Tora's need to find someone who understands him <3

And drunk Hiroto in all his glory

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beyondtheremix March 3 2010, 14:49:55 UTC
Kittttty Pon *pets*

D8

I don't know if I can finish all the other fics LOL They're so long. Chapter fics I think. Right now one of them is almost 30 pages long TAT But I can't post it until I know I'm finished with it otherwise I don't ever finish it LMAO Sad but true.

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bellcheria December 9 2010, 15:06:42 UTC
The return of the motivator kitty >DDDD

Ahw I understand QQ You know, don't push yourself too much (let us push you for you >DD) Just let it come to you |DDD And hey, you're ALMOST done with the 50fics challenge OAO

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beyondtheremix December 9 2010, 17:04:12 UTC
YUP!

JUST SEVEN MORE TO GO *throws confetti*

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