Comments | beyond_insane: fic: edges of intimacy

theviolonist in beyond_insane

fic: edges of intimacy

Jan 25, 2013 15:09

Author: theviolonist
Pairing: Kara/Lee
Wordcount: c. 5K
Summary: It starts with the vegetable shortage.
Spoilers for all of season 1 and 2, just to be sure. AU after Bastille Day.
Rating: R for language and sex
Notes: And - much thanks to my beta, callmeonetrack, without whom this fic probably wouldn't be half of what it is. Thanks for being ruthless, love!

( It starts with the vegetable shortage. )

genre: angst, rating: r, fanfiction, era: season1, genre: drama

Comments 18

callmeonetrack January 25 2013, 15:38:49 UTC

Hurrah! You've posted!

You already know all the little bits I like, but just wanted to say again that I really enjoyed how it all came together and how it brings me back to that first-season pilots tentatively figuring it out goodness!! <3

theviolonist January 25 2013, 23:34:02 UTC

Yes, finally : )

Thank you so much, dear, I couldn't have made it without your help. And they do love each other so, don't they? : )

callmeonetrack January 26 2013, 00:59:18 UTC

My pleasure! And I'm excited to read Rockstar!Kara next ;) Make it happen, lady!

koolaidmom11 January 25 2013, 19:13:24 UTC

I don't know who you are but welcome and
I. ABSOLUTELY. LOVED. THIS!!!!!

theviolonist January 25 2013, 23:34:32 UTC

Yes I'm new to the neighborhood, thank you dear ever so much dear : )

lanalucy January 25 2013, 21:25:37 UTC

Brava! Pilots!Sex, realistically not angst-free, but the right kind of angst. Love the ending.

theviolonist January 25 2013, 23:35:38 UTC

But what is angst-free in this fandom? Thank you, darling, I'm glad you liked it!

kdbleu January 25 2013, 22:29:11 UTC

This is just wonderful. It's been a while since I read something that made me really miss how BSG could have been. Thank you for that.

And keep writing. ;D

theviolonist January 25 2013, 23:35:59 UTC

Eee, thank you so much dear ♥ And I most definitely will!

kdbleu January 25 2013, 23:37:16 UTC

YAY!

*applause*

elzed January 25 2013, 23:30:24 UTC

Ah, fantastic - as it could (should?) have progressed, really, cutting the crap and the mysticism; with the proviso that it gets grimmer and grimmer and, well, it can't end well can it? But I love how they get closer, surrender to their emotions, and your ending works perfectly.

theviolonist January 25 2013, 23:39:10 UTC

Little fangirl moment here, I love your work ♥

And yeah, it's one of the things that struck me the most in BSG - how half the destruction and the death came from the humans themselves, no Cylons needed. Our poor pilots are just in the middle of all that crap : ) Thank you so much, I'm really glad you liked it (and the ending, I love my dramatics : ))!