Comments | bets_cyn: Fic: [NR] Mix of Dark Minors and Sunny Majors (Chapter 14/14)

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Fic: [NR] Mix of Dark Minors and Sunny Majors (Chapter 14/14)

Sep 28, 2011 18:04

Mix of Dark Minors and Sunny Majors
Word Count: Chapter 14: 3,325; [48,282 total]
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Nico/Dani-Possibly. Eventually?
Spoilers: References something from 1x07 and 1x11.
Disclaimer: don't own. Don't profit. Don't … a lot of things
Summary: She'd be willing to bet the Nico of reality was somewhere between her good guy and his evil ( Read more... )

dani santino, nico careles, pg-13, necessary roughness, fan fic

Comments 56

instigator comment #14 brokenroots September 28 2011, 22:45:23 UTC

You know, I didn't notice this before, but now I'm curious about the friendly animosity between Nico and the cook...

Mama C is awesome, again, as always.

Time to post the dinner fic. :P

Re: instigator comment #14 bets_cyn September 28 2011, 22:50:37 UTC

a day at least before the dinner fic goes up.

And who knows.. that may just be a ficlet (compared to this one). I might be pressured into revisiting that for the sake of Tuesday Night Restaurant Series. :P

Re: instigator comment #14 brokenroots September 28 2011, 23:05:31 UTC

Hehe, yes, of course. :)

You should revisit it in the series. ;)

Re: instigator comment #14 goodisrelative September 28 2011, 23:35:22 UTC

I SECOND THIS. We need a) more on the Chef and b) more on this project for Juliette!

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goodisrelative September 28 2011, 23:37:19 UTC

Excellent! :-)

2 things thought.
In Mama C's letter you have "if" instead of "it"... line 5, 1/3rd into the line.

And the code is wrong on the chapter 13 bit. There is an there.

I still love the end of the restaurant scene AND Mama C's gate transfer.

bets_cyn September 28 2011, 23:54:22 UTC

both fixed. :-)

hee. the gate transfer had to come.

ext_739357 September 28 2011, 23:54:09 UTC

So what was in the note with the flowers? (You had me looking up the meanings again - lol) Nico so sweet!!

Great ending, thanks for an awesome story.

Looking forward to Mama C stories!! haha

bets_cyn September 28 2011, 23:57:21 UTC

:-P the note was for Dani not us :-)

hee Others have decreed this must be a Mama C series as well.
I'll just admit that she might make it into every NR universe I write. :-)

ext_739357 September 29 2011, 00:31:47 UTC

Oh ok about the note.

Haha that would be fun having her slipped in to all your NR fics. :)

bets_cyn September 29 2011, 00:41:24 UTC

she's too much fun of a character not to keep popping up.
;-)

impish_dragon September 29 2011, 06:47:35 UTC

I am going to have to look for a lawyer, seeing as how you promised, in writing, that there would be 20 or more chapters and then only gave us 14.

*idly wonders if Harvey Specter is available. Then tries to imagine a NR/Suits crossover*

Good job.

bets_cyn September 29 2011, 11:52:52 UTC

ha ha....
I figured someone would harp on that. It's all because I couldn't do short chapters. I was already moaning about having to post more than 1 when I started posting the story... then I decided on roughly 7 pages per post because no way was I going to survive 20 postings for this story.

:-P
But tonight I shall be nice and post "Sunday Supper at Mama Coluni's" ... 1st in the Mama Coluni Series.... though I don't promise those often or even regularly. :-)

mierke December 21 2011, 13:24:05 UTC

I had downloaded this story from AO3 and wanted to start reading on my Kindle, when I realized AO3 doesn't have the entire story... :( It stops at chapter 9.

bets_cyn December 23 2011, 01:39:08 UTC

I know I had issues trying to put in the new chapters then forgot all about it.

eventually, I will get back there and just delete and upload the entire story