Fic: [NR] Mix of Dark Minors and Sunny Majors (Chapter 9/14)

Sep 24, 2011 22:43

Mix of Dark Minors and Sunny Majors
Word Count: Chapter 9: 3,664; [48,282 total]
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Nico/Dani-Possibly. Eventually?
Spoilers: References something from 1x07 and 1x11.
Disclaimer: don't own. Don't profit. Don't … a lot of things
Summary: She'd be willing to bet the Nico of reality was somewhere between her good guy and his evil ( Read more... )

dani santino, nico careles, pg-13, necessary roughness, fan fic

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goodisrelative September 25 2011, 02:50:44 UTC
you are making Crack crazy! :-)

I do love this whole fic. These parts were great.

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bets_cyn September 25 2011, 02:53:21 UTC
:-)

I'm done for tonight. :-)

Yeah, this is one of my better fics.

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maxir21 September 25 2011, 03:54:26 UTC
I love how Dani is working her way into the graces of Nico's men, or should I say "Nico's Dudes." If she can break them down, Nico should come tumbling soon after.

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bets_cyn September 25 2011, 03:56:45 UTC
hee .... oh not even remotely yet... these were the "good" chapters. While Mama Coluni comes next, so does the evil.... and the destruction.... and possibly the rebuilding.
But first the laughing with Mama Coluni. :-) Because she is one of my better original characters

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maxir21 September 25 2011, 16:21:39 UTC
Hey, life is full of ups and downs, and I would expect nothing less from a quality fic.

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bets_cyn September 25 2011, 16:48:25 UTC
:-)
that is good... because the next issues kinda took over when the original plot was pretty much wrapped up. ... but fallout usually does that.

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instigator comment #9 brokenroots September 25 2011, 04:24:22 UTC
Is she really allowed to "mellow" Nico?

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Re: instigator comment #9 bets_cyn September 25 2011, 04:27:56 UTC
only when he lets her
:-)
and not in front of the team. his men, *shrugs* but never the team

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Re: instigator comment #9 brokenroots September 25 2011, 04:30:24 UTC
Definitely not in front of the team.

Hmm. I seem to recall making Nico have that discussion with her not long ago. :)

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Re: instigator comment #9 bets_cyn September 25 2011, 13:27:26 UTC
hmmmm
I would never have read that... or stolen that... but wait this one was done before that one. :-)
and let's face it... it is a common thread because of what he does.

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impish_dragon September 25 2011, 06:27:35 UTC
If Dani can charm Nico's Dudes, then Nico doesn't stand a chance. See, I like that Nico can be "mellow" with Dani. And I think he's scary enough to pull it off even in front of the team. I think it would only take a time or two of Dani not running interference for people to realize that Nico may be "soft" with Dani but he's still one scary dude not to be messed with.

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bets_cyn September 25 2011, 13:21:30 UTC
:-)
Nico knows how to protect his perceived weaknesses... and Dani's strong enough to realize Nico's perceived weakness can make him even scarier to deal with. :-)
Either way, it's a delicate balance with the team.

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ext_739357 September 25 2011, 14:42:25 UTC
luv how they are so comfortable with each other even though they aren't together. They know each other so well is almost scary.

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bets_cyn September 25 2011, 15:09:52 UTC
I've decided they are Ying & Yang... different halves of the same whole... it is what makes them work so well together. He fixes situations, she saves the people... can't really have one without the other
:-)

thanks

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ext_739357 September 25 2011, 18:58:11 UTC
So very true!!

I found myself looking up the meaning of the flowers. Hmmm... their meanings are very interesting to this story.

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bets_cyn September 25 2011, 19:09:21 UTC
hee hee.
yes, the flowers have gotten much discussion.... it was one of the things GoodisRelative and Brokenroots would not allow to be left alone... and I needed to add more about them... they still think there should be more, but I have ended it where I wanted to and shall not be swayed.
but I've always like the meaning of flowers... probably stems (ha ha) from mob giving yellow roses to people they were going to knock off

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