Comments | bets_cyn: Fic: [NR] Mix of Dark Minors and Sunny Majors (Chapter 5/14)

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Fic: [NR] Mix of Dark Minors and Sunny Majors (Chapter 5/14)

Sep 23, 2011 18:08

Mix of Dark Minors and Sunny Majors
Word Count: Chapter 5: 3,803; [48,282 total]
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Nico/Dani-Possibly. Eventually?
Spoilers: References something from 1x07 and 1x11.
Disclaimer: don't own. Don't profit. Don't … a lot of things
Summary: She'd be willing to bet the Nico of reality was somewhere between her good guy and his evil ( Read more... )

dani santino, nico careles, pg-13, necessary roughness, fan fic

Comments 13

instigator comment #5 brokenroots September 23 2011, 23:01:04 UTC

I like their conversation about the use of her name.

And she's brave to mess with his phone.

Your code needs a slight tweek here:

,em>Why the hell was his alarm going off now? It was 6 PM.

Re: instigator comment #5 bets_cyn September 23 2011, 23:07:17 UTC

*grrr* code!

HA. Twas a flash of brilliant fun to have her mess with his phone. Just a simple tweak of PM/AM so easily forgotten about. :-)

The name convo. had to come. Friends need to use their first names. :-) Especially with enforced living together.

Re: instigator comment #5 brokenroots September 23 2011, 23:42:36 UTC

Yes, it is evil...

Yep, very easy to forget. :)

Yes, they do. Feels like Dani and Nico always have to have that conversation, but then I always feel like he has to call her Santino, so...

Re: instigator comment #5 bets_cyn September 23 2011, 23:44:40 UTC

i know there are still some spots where I don't like that I have him calling her "dani" but I'm also letting them go.

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impish_dragon September 24 2011, 02:55:58 UTC

LOL at Dani being able to change his phone twice. The name convo was good. I think Dani is finding some admirerers in Nico's security team. Especially if she keeps serving them breakfast and coffee. They say the way to a man's heart is through his stomach.

bets_cyn September 24 2011, 14:17:29 UTC

:-) She has to have to some sources .... for nonessential info ... and support for when Nico tries pushing her away. :-)

tennisnike September 25 2011, 02:28:44 UTC

this chapter was hilarious. She has her ways. lol.

bets_cyn September 25 2011, 02:38:06 UTC

when up against a man in black, a woman has to have her own ways to "handle" him. :-)

maxir21 September 25 2011, 02:41:18 UTC

This chapter had me all smiles. I love the bit about the heels and make-up. The fact that they are that in tune with each other without trying is perfect.

Also I now want a felafel. I make my grocery list based on what is being eaten in fics. I think I have a problem :-/

bets_cyn September 25 2011, 02:44:53 UTC

:-)
I thank god that I have my $3 Felafel street cart within walking distance of my office.

Get the smiles in now.... way later chapters won't invoke smiles.