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Feb 11, 2009 03:42

I still have a little ache inside me for you, you know. Maybe it's for you, or maybe it's for the you I thought you were. Then again, it might be for your sister, or the last girl I kissed for real, or that punk on the train with the blue hair. It might be for any number of women with accents-- British, Aussie, Kiwi, or deep American south. ( Read more... )

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muninn_huginn February 11 2009, 09:13:49 UTC
Echo

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alibaster February 11 2009, 09:19:42 UTC
A thing of beauty, and sadness, and loneliness, and desire, and longing.

Beautiful words that make me want to hold you, an almost complete stranger, until you smile again.

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niamh_sage February 11 2009, 09:47:53 UTC
Simply beautiful.

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fishmakestwo February 11 2009, 11:10:09 UTC
Beautiful. Although I think this makes you above a 4.

My favorite line: "If I could, I would decant it, sliding the ache off as it floats on top of the rest of my life..."

This would be great for you to read aloud someday.

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riemann_sphere February 11 2009, 12:44:46 UTC
wow. beautiful.

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