X Marks the Spot, Part Three

Mar 07, 2011 00:29

Teal'c, in voice-over:  "Previously, on Stargate SG-1 . . . "

Part One is here.

Part Two is here.

X Marks the Spot

Part Three: In For a Penny

The entrance to the underground maze yawned in front of Teal’c and MacGyver, a toothless black mouth.

“The generator - the lights - ” Mac gestured with his right hand; Teal’c was holding him up by the left.

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stargate, alphabet soup, macgyver, fic

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archersangel March 10 2011, 05:54:09 UTC
i too like what you did with the myths. and daniel translating more or less against his will was interesting way to have the translation IMHO.

looking forward to the epilogue.

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lolmac March 11 2011, 03:30:10 UTC
Thanks! With the translating -- I suddenly realised that I just couldn't handwave the notion that Hebe would wake up after a few millenium and be able to speak English. Good thing Daniel was there . . .

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sg_fignewton March 10 2011, 11:21:00 UTC
MUCH YAY.

And that dry Teal'c comment about Roswell had me giggling in the midst of all the drama!

Wonderful stuff. Hurry up with the epilogue, will you? :)

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lolmac March 11 2011, 03:22:20 UTC
Thank you! And I'm doing my best on the epilogue!

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sidlj March 13 2011, 02:59:08 UTC
Action-packed action and bewildered!Mac FTW!

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lolmac March 15 2011, 13:02:16 UTC
Bewildered!Mac was a blast. There are several episodes in which he dreams he's in the Old West, or in Camelot, so the can-I-please-wake-up-now idea is particularly apt.

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