X Marks the Spot: Part Two

[lolmac]

Cue Teal'c's voice:  " Last week, on Stargate SG-1 . . . "

X Marks the Spot

Part Two:  Penny Wise

Having Lacie’s dig invaded by mystery men with military backup didn’t seem like a great way to start the morning. Based on past experience, that kinda thing usually seems to end with me getting locked up, or beaten up, or arrested, or worse. I never

Comments

[revdorothyl]

Nice work with Mac and Jack letting the quarrels of 30 years ago obscure their perceptions of the present (family will do that to you!), while Teal'c, Sam, and Daniel are able to get a more accurate picture of both men.

Looking forward to more, whenever it's ready to post.

[lolmac]

Thank you! Yes, that's family for you. The more they actually have in common, the worse they snap at each other. Admittedly, with Jack, we have someone who will pick fights with his clones.

[archersangel]

i wanted to say before i forget (again) that i like the reason you have for macgyver & jack's estrangement. it makes sense with what we know about them.

[lolmac]

Thank you! I'm glad it works for you! There's a bit more in that corner that might yet come out, too.

[sg_fignewton]

“Mac’Gyver.”

That totally cracked me up because OF COURSE Teal'c would put the apostrophe in there!

Jack frowned at her. “You want dessert that much?”

::sprorfles:: So perfectly Jack! And then you went and wrote this: Jack remembered a time when he’d been able to look at the moon and not see a potential tactical strongpoint for an enemy attack. Oh, JACK.

And then BANG into all the action. Could you post the next part, please? Say, in the next five minutes? :)

[cflute]

Brava, brava! Eagerly awaiting the next installment. This is a great story, holds together well even for someone who barely knows anything about either show.