I loved the wedding moment, the "I won't let you die" part seems fabulous to me! I definitively love your view on Doctor's thoughts, how he does get the message, FINALLY: that he is allowed to ask for help, that he's not alone! /sobbing mess excuse the ramblings, just saw it again this afternoon and it still makes me so happy
Basically, another fabulous piece of yours! Thank you!!
Oh, this was just wonderful! I loved the way you used the "dancing at weddings" line - I'd always wondered about that one, and I'm not sure whether you're brilliant for finding it or I was just being a fool not to realize it'd been there all along, but anyway, it's my headcanon now, lol. I loved the Doctor's burning hatred towards Kovarian, and the way he just couldn't stand River's indifference towards the chaos and his helplessness to stop her. Their belonging together was very nicely expressed, with pretty intense feelings, I like the way you said "mine!". Those lines were just gorgeous: "She wasn't the child twisted into an assassin. She wasn't the lonely little girl surrounded by monsters. She wasn't the avenging angel of a warped church. She wasn't the outsider, abandoned, or alone." and "They had worlds to explore, innocents to save, dances to dance, hats to kill, and flailing to flail." => oh my, this is so them. Oh, I loved the line about his hearts too, it was smashing. Really brilliant job! =)
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/sobbing mess excuse the ramblings, just saw it again this afternoon and it still makes me so happy
Basically, another fabulous piece of yours! Thank you!!
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That made my morning. Thank you so much! :D
Lovely piece. :)
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