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seanchaidh May 2 2006, 02:53:02 UTC
Wow. So not expecting that twist about Seth. But very logical! :)

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advection May 6 2006, 01:17:33 UTC
Plotty and planny and schemey and wonderful, how it builds out from the cliff at the end of the Ancient Egypt storyline using the raw materials of what's already in canon. Cool.

Also love seeing Sam's more Carter-like traits emerge.

And the humor. Every part has a bunch of chuckles; enjoying them all.

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green_grrl May 14 2006, 22:37:49 UTC
I have so much love for all their little interactions, and how they are starting to knot together as a team. Stinky girl Sam -- hee! :-)

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brandinsbabe May 15 2006, 22:34:53 UTC
this is so fantastic. and i have to tell you, i think i love you!!! you've explained 2 of the things that have bugged me the most... you've layed out out the whole time travel thing exactly how ive been trying to tell people but could never explain. it actually makes sense the way you have them explaining it.

AND the one thing that always bothered me about Moebius, which was how they portrayed Jack being all ok and fishing on boats and stuff. when clearly things would have been worse for him...he might even be dead...if it wasnt for his trip to abydos, and the stargate. im glad you explained them in this instead of just leaving it as a loose end.

im enjoying this so much. its witty and funny and i love how its just coming together. its fun to see how they are starting to turn into the team we know.

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