fic: One Thing (genderswap!Ziam, Larry) (part 2/2)

[berusama]

Title: Fall Into My Arms (part 2/2)
Pairing(s): Ziam, Larry
Rating: PG-13
Warning(s): genderswap, femmeslash
Disclaimer: I cannot and do not own/know/associate with/stalk the real people mentioned herein. The following is a work of fiction. No money was made in its creation.
Summary: Leah's a musical arts student who has got it bad for the gorgeous

Comments

[iheartvmars07]

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
oh my god, can I have like 20,000 more words of this please? PLEASE?
it's just so good and so cute and leah is so perfect
i just can't

[berusama]

lol, well i am planning a sequel, but idk if it will be as long as this one... tho it is guaranteed to have 100% more sex! :D thank you for taking the time to comment!♥!

[ellekinss]

ahhh i absolutely adored this! i can't wait for the sequel, and your characterization was wonderful. thank you!

[berusama]

thank you so much, i'm so glad you enjoyed it!♥! hopefully i can get the sequel started soon :)

[andine_mcfly]

this was SO SO SO good, i wished that this would've gone on and on and on but it didn't and all that music was sooo good and i loved how you had linked it all and yeah, it was so perfect and i love you and i love this story and god this was SO good.

[berusama]

oh god, this comment! i could read it forever!♥! i'm so glad you liked the music! i was a little nervous about it b/c i realized about half-way through that Zaynah's tastes in music were definitely just my own tastes in music, but i decided to go with it anyway :) i'm so so glad you liked it, thank you so much for commenting♥♥♥♥♥!

[sarcasticweathe]

Okay so I actually love you right now.
I freakin' love The XX and this song is gorgeous (just like this fic)
I love everyone in this, how Dani wasn't the bad guy (girl..) but rather they just fell out of love (words cannot describe how I feel when people write her as a cliché bitch)
Nia was so awesome 'Pussies: the Breakfast of Champions'. is the greatest hat ever (and I'm really having to try hard not to just quote everything)
Harrie and Lucie's relationship was just perfect, it just seems so real and like them (and I adored the hints of Harrie/Lucie/Nia)
And of course Leah and Zaynah were fantastic, I loved how Leah kept almost sitting next to her but always backing out and really everything about their relationship.
So yeah I really love femmeslash and that was super adorable and funny and apparently there's a sequel so I'm going to stalk you read it now..

[berusama]

hey, hi, wow, this is an amazing comment. i might actually love you too, lol. i'm glad you liked the song choices and the characterizations!! honestly, having the characters seem genuine is everything that i want from my fics, so i'm glad you liked them!

um, to be honest, i completely forgot about this fic's sequel, and when i went looking for it i found that it was practically finished, but never edited or posted >_< so yeah, hopefully i can get that out for you in the next few days, or so.

thank you again for commenting!♥!

[sarcasticweathe]

Hi! Thanks, I'm not that great at commenting so what I lack in coherency I usually make up for in length ;) Yes, potential love! Yeah, they just make the fic more realistic (I never grow unamused of fiction being realistic.. never!) and I dunno, flow better in a sense.. (that makes little sense but meh)
Oh yeah, I was going to ask you about that, as I tried to click on it and it went weird (I just blamed technology conspiring against me.. (again))
No problem, thanks for being such an amazing person!

[berusama]

Thanks! You're the best commenter, with or without coherency :D and gaaaaah, i totally i said i'd post the sequel in a few days, several days ago, but hopefully i'll be posting it soon!!

[chocopepsifloat]

gosh Leah and Zaynah are so cute.

and 'Pussies: the Breakfast of Champions'...best haha.

[berusama]

:D thanks again!♥!