New Due South Slashfic - Parity by Berty

[bertybertle]

Happy Valentines Everyone! *hearts and hugs all round

Comments

[llassah]

Wow, that was brilliant! I love how afraid Ray is, and the scene at the water's edge is a brilliantly powerful piece of writing, both for what they show, and what they are trying to suppress. And knowing Welsh is my favorite thing in slash stories *hearts him*. You made Ray intense and frightened all the way through this section, and you keep him in character too- he doesn't become some gibbering archetype, he's still Ray, with this knowing self-awareness. The sex was hot, the guilt was achingly described, and I am totally in love with how well Ray knows Fraser, and the tease in their relationship. And he says 'I win at stealthy'! You're my new hero *g*. And ohh, the epilogue! They work so well together! Lone Ranger FTW. Hot and angsty and funny and perfect.

[bertybertle]

Wow, yourself! What a lovely feedback. I was worried that I'd lost the "Ray" over the arc of the story - I found it strangely hard to keep up his POV, so I'm extra pleased to hear that you recognised him. Bless you! And thanks for the lovely comments. *twirls you*

[viciouscats]

Aww, poor Ray. But you made it all better! Wonderful story. Angsty, hot, with a touch of funny - my favourite combination. Thank you!

[bertybertle]

Well I'm thrilled you enjoyed it, my dear! Thanks for the kind words.