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karen_jk December 4 2009, 22:36:02 UTC
Oh my goodness, what a heartbreaker. Beautiful.

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bertybertle December 7 2009, 21:50:02 UTC
Hi there! Thank you so much! And it's hopeful... right? :-)

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kill_claudio December 4 2009, 23:29:32 UTC
Aaaaw. Private Universe was so sad (in that sweetly hopeful way you have of writing sad things). I'm thrilled that you couldn't resist giving them a slightly happier ending. Daniel will learn more. He's nothing if not persistent.

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bertybertle December 7 2009, 21:51:48 UTC
Hee! It has been bugging me that the PU ending was a little bleak. Fixed now. Next? *g*

Thanks for reading, KC, and season's greetings, Hon!

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ernutet December 25 2009, 23:05:41 UTC
Here via...some...LJ...

I loved Private Universe the first time I've read it, and this was such a pleasant surprise! Sad and hopeful at the same time, with great Jack-voice.
Thanks; looking forward to the next installments *grins, takes out popcorn*

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bertybertle January 3 2010, 22:39:33 UTC
Thank you so much - I'm glad you approve of the sequel. I couldn't leave it quite that hopeless! *g* Thanks for reading and dropping me a line - I really appreciate it.

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Wonderful ravenholdt January 7 2010, 10:16:24 UTC
That was so sweetly done. :)
I love that Daniel is healing and hope , I dont know, for more? *eyebrow*:D
Truthfully it could end here and Id still be smiling like an idiot. Good stuff. Thanks for posting. :)

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Re: Wonderful bertybertle January 7 2010, 15:05:57 UTC
Aw! You're too sweet! AND you forgave me for pimping my own story! *g* Thank you - on both counts.

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