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akindofpastry January 30 2008, 01:24:36 UTC
I really liked this! Very well done.

Also, hot. That's a vital piont to make.

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bertybertle January 30 2008, 16:41:01 UTC
Thank you so much. Most kind of you.

And hot is ALWAYS a vital point. :-)

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bertybertle January 30 2008, 16:43:26 UTC
Awww! Thank you! You always say lovely things. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was such fun to write something that wasn't for a challenge for a change. Yay!

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chattycatsmeow January 30 2008, 02:45:13 UTC
Wonderful. I can easily see Jack as a man who casually wields power and is at the same time uneasy with it. Daniel, wherever/whenever he may be, is passionate, determined, yet unsure of himself on a very personal level.

This is so very them, and so very hot. Hurray for happy endings!

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bertybertle January 30 2008, 17:08:49 UTC
Thank you so much. What lovely comments. I'm glad they came across in character for you.

And happy endings come as standard around here - even if they are a little ambiguous at times. :-)

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green_grrl January 30 2008, 07:31:48 UTC
Oh, god yes I love this! Seriously, seriously hot! The characterizations of jack and Daniel were perfect. ♥

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bertybertle January 30 2008, 17:09:44 UTC
*twirls you*

Thank you so much. You're too kind.

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paper_tzipporah January 30 2008, 08:33:55 UTC
BEAUTIFUL. Absolutely stunning. I was a little leery of the premise, but as soon as I started reading I couldn't stop. Thank you for sharing!

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bertybertle January 31 2008, 13:21:32 UTC
Gach! I'm my own worst enemy. My inability to write synopsies is legendary. Thank you very much for giving it a go anyway, and I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. :-)

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